SVU: Let me remodel your thinking
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G through L › Law & Order
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
8
Views:
5,014
Reviews:
4
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own Law & Order, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
SVU: Let me remodel your thinking
Disclaimers: Law & Order: Special Victims Unit and its characters-Elliot Stabler, Olivia Benson, Donald Cragen, Odafin ‘Fin’ Tutuola, John Munch and Alexandra Cabot- belong to Wolf Films, Universal Network, and NBC Studios. No copyright infringements whatsoever are intended. I own the original characters and the story. And no, I am not making any money off of this.
Rating: R –yes you get to read about sex in here…
Pairing: Venessa Carter/ Stabler and who ever else my wicked mind picks
Categories: Romance, Drama
Series: Let me remodel your thinking.
Summary: The SVU squad has been through some dramatic changes, people come and go but none is as striking as Det. Vanessa Carter. Find out how the new line up will work.
Warnings: Explicit sexual content, explicit depiction of sexual assault acts, murder scenes.
-“I have seen some heavy files but this one has to be the worst” Munch commented and dropped the file back onto Donald’s desk.
The other man looked up at the detective and shook his head. He was rather excited about the new addition to the squad, besides they needed more people badly. Lately detectives came and went like the seasons; the stress of the job took its toll on the best of them. Fin, Munch, Benson, Stabler, they still lasted but he wondered for how long. His hand moved to the file and brought it under his nose. He flipped it open once more, eyes resting upon the picture of the lovely woman. Sparkling green eyes, flowing red hair, perfect lips. She was such a flower he was almost afraid of seeing her fade in this horrific line of work.
“What?” John finally snapped and leaned over the desk peering down over Donald.
Once more the captain turned the file towards John and tapped the picture
-“Look at her…look at her and tell me why the hell people even bother to come here and waste their life, their health and sanity like this?” He shook his head and leaned back in his chair, hands coming to rest upon his lap.
-“Because we care” Olivia spoke while walking through the wide open door of the office. “Morning” she continued and walked to the desk thus brining with her the aroma of coffee that emanated from a freshly poured cup.” Who’s this?”, asked the woman while glancing briefly over the wide spread file of the future addition to the team.
-“We need some one like her, and yes she is coming to work here. As a matter of fact she’s supposed to be here this morning” Don informed the two and then paused for a few seconds “Liv why don’t you get Fin and Stabler in here, I am sure they would like to know about this. Besides we should stick around and get ourselves introduced to this woman, let her in on the ropes around here”
Olivia nodded calmly as she looked from Munch to Don perhaps searching for more details, but after all, everything that she needed to know was in that file. One more glance was cast at the picture of the woman and then she trailed out of the office.
-“Elliot, Fin” called Olivia and beckoned them to her.
Both men peeked up from their papers and their cups of coffee. It was such an amusing sight that the woman could not stifle a light giggle which caught the attention of Fin as he walked up to her.
-“Hey, what’s up?” his arms folded over his broad chest and tilted his head to the side when he remembered the giggle “What are ya giggling about?”
Stabler simply nodded as he approached them and looked at Olivia with a questioning glance. He knew that he will be getting the answer to his question soon. And indeed it was so.
-“Captain has some news for us, come on “ Olivia finally explained and led the two into the office.
From the outside it seemed as if there was a sea of suits in that office. Sharp dressed shirt and tie only. Dark, light, with specs of colors popping from the ties. Yet they were all comfortable like that and it made both the men and the woman look incredibly good. Munch had a somewhat dark aura to him, a bit of a mystery, Fin looked neat but held the feeling that he was not exactly a clean cut boy, Donald, well he just looked as if he was the boss, Elliot seemed like the clean cut type, but it was something that always sparkled in those eyes of his which warned the faint of heart about him, and Olivia, well she was a flower among the men and a true beauty without being ravishing- unlike the new lady Mss. Carter.
-“Hold the phone” Fin simply burst out as he grabbed the picture of the woman from the file “ Carter?” He looked over at Cragen all questioning like and quirked a brow “What kind of trouble did this crazy woman get herself into this time?”
Everyone looked at Fin rather surprised while Elliot managed to pull the paper away from him and look over the writing. A slight smile formed upon his lips, a fact which Liv immediately noticed and attributed it to the good looks of the woman.
-“You know her?” Donald asked immediately and in just seconds all eyes were on Fin.
He chuckled and looked at them before folding his arms over his chest once more
-“Yeah, I know her. She came to Narcotics 5 months before I got transferred here. I’m tellin’ ya , she’s a hand full, but I’ll be damned if I’ve seen some one able to pull off the shit she used to.”
The looks on their faces were priceless. They all wanted to learn more about her, and having Fin with a little bit of an insight, well that was priceless too. Seeing how he had captured the audience, he leaned back against the wall and continued the little story
-“I’ve never worked with her specifically, but I know that she could fool anyone into believing she is anything from a hoe to a high class lady. And yeah…everyone loved the outfits, if ya know what I mean” ended the man with a chuckle
Elliot raised a braw and smirked to himself as Munch simply rolled his eyes at the vivid depiction that Fin put forth for them
-“Any way man, bottom line’s that she’s good. At her age, she seems to have more experience than some old timers around here ... no offence Munch”
The man shook his head and tapped Fin on the shoulder
- “Your day will come to... no offence”
A light tap on the door and there was silence. Everyone turned to see who it was and a light gasp was heard as Elliot laid his eyes on the red head standing in the doorway. High healed boots, knee high tight skirt with a nice slit in the back, tight shirt and jacket that matched the skirt, all of this engulfing one of the most perfect female bodies they had seen. Her green eyes looked from one to the other and remained on Fin for a few moments before she smiled softly and walked past them towards Don.
-“Good morning Captain” the voice came out soft, sultry yet commanding and secure “ Vanessa Carter, former Narcotics”
She briefly introduced herself and shook the hand of Cragen who was almost dumbstruck.
-“Ahh yes, we have been expecting you. I’m Donald Cragen, and this is the rest of the team” he said and motioned towards the very quiet people in the room
-“Detective Olivia Benson”
Nessa nodded and murmured
-“How do you do “ while shaking Olivia’s hand.
-“This is Detective Stabler “ Don continued and once more greetings were exchanged and hands shook.
-“Pleasure to meet you Detective” she spoke and smiled lightly
-“Same here “ Elliot replied
-“Det. Munch” “Welcome aboard” he said while shaking her hand
-“And this is Fin Tutuola “ Cragen ended and left her on her own
-“ Oh, we have met” she spoke with a smile and welcomed the embrace of a former partner “Nice to see you here”
Fin smirked at her words and eyed her , not making an effort to hide it
-“ Ohh I’m happy to see ya too.. ya look good, I take it ya god fed up with the boys down at Narcotics and decided to come an’ play with the big boys now”
Vanessa smirked lightly and placed a hand upon his cheek as she whispered
-“You are flattering yourself Fin” The Captain decided it was time to set things in motion and therefore motioned for them to pay attention
-“Alright, Stabler take Carter and show her around, set the rules down for the lady, Benson, Tutuola you have to tie some loose ends on that rapist case. Alex wants to meet with you, she thinks that you can reach a deal with the man. Munch, you….”
Munch smiled and dismissed the lack of words from the Captain with a slight shook of his hand
-“I’ll just go do what ever it is I usually do”
Don nodded and sat back down in his chair
-“Fine…I have to get out of here in 2 hours. DA’s office needs me for some reason”
With new tasks assigned they all left the office. Nessa was quite happy to end up paired up with Elliot Stabler, and even more amused at Fin who would constantly snicker around her. This seemed like a tight team, it seemed like people were not only partners here but also friends. A nice Captain and a bunch of crazy people over which Fin probably ruled ( craziness wise ) She looked around as they made their way to the desks and she was showed her new desk.
-“We’re out” Fin announced and looked over at Liv who grabbed her coat “You ready?”
Olivia nodded and cast a glance at Stabler and Nessa
-“ If anything turns up we’ll call you”
Carter nodded and smiled at Fin who was quick to counter her action before taking off with Liv. She sighed and sat down at her new desk
-“Well this is less crowded than at Narcs, which is a good thing.”
Soon she stood up, she seemed as if she was trying to find her place but could not figure exactly what was going on.
-“I need to get my things from the car. I’ll be right back”
Elliot followed her as she took a few steps
-“I’ll help you out. Where’s your car?”
Nessa smiled and walked with him down to the parking lot. Men would literally stop what ever it was that they were doing and stared at her as they walked by. Some commented, she could hear them but could not make out what exactly it was that they were saying. Elliot did not seem bothered by this, he seemed almost happy and proud for some weird reason. Perhaps now that he was a free man he could get back in the hunt, and he became more or less a competition for all the others around him. Elliot thought little of this aspect and never really believed that he could recover quickly after his divorce. Soon they reached the car. Few words were spoken during this little walk down the building. Elliot pointed out some offices and people that she should remember but other than that it was pretty quiet.
-“This is it” she said and unlocked the Black 2002 Trans Am.
-“ Nice car” Elliot commented while grabbing a couple of boxes from the small trunk
-“Thank you, she is my pride and joy. “ she smiled and grabbed another box.
With a quick move she closed the door and locked the car.
-“Even thought I am a cop, I still like to hold a little bit of spark in this life of mine. So the car does come in handy for that purpose”
He nodded and cast an appreciative look over the machine and then over her behind as she walked in front of him and up the few steps. He found himself smiling at the way her body swayed, the way her hips danced with each move she made. He noticed that in women, at times even Olivia had that but unlike Liv, Vanessa was taller, more athletic and built like a goddess.
He dropped the boxes onto her desk and smiled
-“Here you go”
She nodded and lowered her own box onto the chair
-“Thanks Detective”
He quickly rose a hand and stopped her
-“No no.. Elliot. The Captain can call me Detective, but my partners call me Elliot”
With a smile the woman agreed and quickly spoke
-“Well then, call me Nessa, or Vanessa, which ever you prefer”
-“Need any help settling in ?” asked the man clearly willing to help out
-“Ohh no.. I can handle this. But I would appreciate some coffee”
- “I’ll go get it “ and with those words he turned around and went to the table where the coffee maker and the cups rested neatly.
She watched him for a few moments, watched him carry himself, watched him make small talk with another woman. She felt strange when she saw that but quickly dismissed it. Why was she even looking him over. It was so wrong. Vanessa returned quickly to unloading the boxes over on her desk, she sat everything in place, all organized . No photos of any family members, well except her parents.
-“Here you go.. black and hot. Guaranteed to wake you up from a coma” Elliot said and handed the coffee to her.
-“Hey thanks “ she replied and took the cup from his hand, fingers gently brushing- skin on skin-shivers- such strange sensations.
He leaned against the desk and looked over her photos with a smile. She just sat back and watched him. Perhaps this was going to be a good change for her.
Thank you for reading this. It means alot to me and i hope you liked it.
REVIEWS PLEASE. I love them. If you have ideas please let me know. Don't expect a PWP. I am sorry to dissapoint but this is not what i like to write. Let me know what you think. This way i can provide you with better writing.
NEXT CHAPTER-> Elliot and Nessa get a little to close for comfort.
Rating: R –yes you get to read about sex in here…
Pairing: Venessa Carter/ Stabler and who ever else my wicked mind picks
Categories: Romance, Drama
Series: Let me remodel your thinking.
Summary: The SVU squad has been through some dramatic changes, people come and go but none is as striking as Det. Vanessa Carter. Find out how the new line up will work.
Warnings: Explicit sexual content, explicit depiction of sexual assault acts, murder scenes.
-“I have seen some heavy files but this one has to be the worst” Munch commented and dropped the file back onto Donald’s desk.
The other man looked up at the detective and shook his head. He was rather excited about the new addition to the squad, besides they needed more people badly. Lately detectives came and went like the seasons; the stress of the job took its toll on the best of them. Fin, Munch, Benson, Stabler, they still lasted but he wondered for how long. His hand moved to the file and brought it under his nose. He flipped it open once more, eyes resting upon the picture of the lovely woman. Sparkling green eyes, flowing red hair, perfect lips. She was such a flower he was almost afraid of seeing her fade in this horrific line of work.
“What?” John finally snapped and leaned over the desk peering down over Donald.
Once more the captain turned the file towards John and tapped the picture
-“Look at her…look at her and tell me why the hell people even bother to come here and waste their life, their health and sanity like this?” He shook his head and leaned back in his chair, hands coming to rest upon his lap.
-“Because we care” Olivia spoke while walking through the wide open door of the office. “Morning” she continued and walked to the desk thus brining with her the aroma of coffee that emanated from a freshly poured cup.” Who’s this?”, asked the woman while glancing briefly over the wide spread file of the future addition to the team.
-“We need some one like her, and yes she is coming to work here. As a matter of fact she’s supposed to be here this morning” Don informed the two and then paused for a few seconds “Liv why don’t you get Fin and Stabler in here, I am sure they would like to know about this. Besides we should stick around and get ourselves introduced to this woman, let her in on the ropes around here”
Olivia nodded calmly as she looked from Munch to Don perhaps searching for more details, but after all, everything that she needed to know was in that file. One more glance was cast at the picture of the woman and then she trailed out of the office.
-“Elliot, Fin” called Olivia and beckoned them to her.
Both men peeked up from their papers and their cups of coffee. It was such an amusing sight that the woman could not stifle a light giggle which caught the attention of Fin as he walked up to her.
-“Hey, what’s up?” his arms folded over his broad chest and tilted his head to the side when he remembered the giggle “What are ya giggling about?”
Stabler simply nodded as he approached them and looked at Olivia with a questioning glance. He knew that he will be getting the answer to his question soon. And indeed it was so.
-“Captain has some news for us, come on “ Olivia finally explained and led the two into the office.
From the outside it seemed as if there was a sea of suits in that office. Sharp dressed shirt and tie only. Dark, light, with specs of colors popping from the ties. Yet they were all comfortable like that and it made both the men and the woman look incredibly good. Munch had a somewhat dark aura to him, a bit of a mystery, Fin looked neat but held the feeling that he was not exactly a clean cut boy, Donald, well he just looked as if he was the boss, Elliot seemed like the clean cut type, but it was something that always sparkled in those eyes of his which warned the faint of heart about him, and Olivia, well she was a flower among the men and a true beauty without being ravishing- unlike the new lady Mss. Carter.
-“Hold the phone” Fin simply burst out as he grabbed the picture of the woman from the file “ Carter?” He looked over at Cragen all questioning like and quirked a brow “What kind of trouble did this crazy woman get herself into this time?”
Everyone looked at Fin rather surprised while Elliot managed to pull the paper away from him and look over the writing. A slight smile formed upon his lips, a fact which Liv immediately noticed and attributed it to the good looks of the woman.
-“You know her?” Donald asked immediately and in just seconds all eyes were on Fin.
He chuckled and looked at them before folding his arms over his chest once more
-“Yeah, I know her. She came to Narcotics 5 months before I got transferred here. I’m tellin’ ya , she’s a hand full, but I’ll be damned if I’ve seen some one able to pull off the shit she used to.”
The looks on their faces were priceless. They all wanted to learn more about her, and having Fin with a little bit of an insight, well that was priceless too. Seeing how he had captured the audience, he leaned back against the wall and continued the little story
-“I’ve never worked with her specifically, but I know that she could fool anyone into believing she is anything from a hoe to a high class lady. And yeah…everyone loved the outfits, if ya know what I mean” ended the man with a chuckle
Elliot raised a braw and smirked to himself as Munch simply rolled his eyes at the vivid depiction that Fin put forth for them
-“Any way man, bottom line’s that she’s good. At her age, she seems to have more experience than some old timers around here ... no offence Munch”
The man shook his head and tapped Fin on the shoulder
- “Your day will come to... no offence”
A light tap on the door and there was silence. Everyone turned to see who it was and a light gasp was heard as Elliot laid his eyes on the red head standing in the doorway. High healed boots, knee high tight skirt with a nice slit in the back, tight shirt and jacket that matched the skirt, all of this engulfing one of the most perfect female bodies they had seen. Her green eyes looked from one to the other and remained on Fin for a few moments before she smiled softly and walked past them towards Don.
-“Good morning Captain” the voice came out soft, sultry yet commanding and secure “ Vanessa Carter, former Narcotics”
She briefly introduced herself and shook the hand of Cragen who was almost dumbstruck.
-“Ahh yes, we have been expecting you. I’m Donald Cragen, and this is the rest of the team” he said and motioned towards the very quiet people in the room
-“Detective Olivia Benson”
Nessa nodded and murmured
-“How do you do “ while shaking Olivia’s hand.
-“This is Detective Stabler “ Don continued and once more greetings were exchanged and hands shook.
-“Pleasure to meet you Detective” she spoke and smiled lightly
-“Same here “ Elliot replied
-“Det. Munch” “Welcome aboard” he said while shaking her hand
-“And this is Fin Tutuola “ Cragen ended and left her on her own
-“ Oh, we have met” she spoke with a smile and welcomed the embrace of a former partner “Nice to see you here”
Fin smirked at her words and eyed her , not making an effort to hide it
-“ Ohh I’m happy to see ya too.. ya look good, I take it ya god fed up with the boys down at Narcotics and decided to come an’ play with the big boys now”
Vanessa smirked lightly and placed a hand upon his cheek as she whispered
-“You are flattering yourself Fin” The Captain decided it was time to set things in motion and therefore motioned for them to pay attention
-“Alright, Stabler take Carter and show her around, set the rules down for the lady, Benson, Tutuola you have to tie some loose ends on that rapist case. Alex wants to meet with you, she thinks that you can reach a deal with the man. Munch, you….”
Munch smiled and dismissed the lack of words from the Captain with a slight shook of his hand
-“I’ll just go do what ever it is I usually do”
Don nodded and sat back down in his chair
-“Fine…I have to get out of here in 2 hours. DA’s office needs me for some reason”
With new tasks assigned they all left the office. Nessa was quite happy to end up paired up with Elliot Stabler, and even more amused at Fin who would constantly snicker around her. This seemed like a tight team, it seemed like people were not only partners here but also friends. A nice Captain and a bunch of crazy people over which Fin probably ruled ( craziness wise ) She looked around as they made their way to the desks and she was showed her new desk.
-“We’re out” Fin announced and looked over at Liv who grabbed her coat “You ready?”
Olivia nodded and cast a glance at Stabler and Nessa
-“ If anything turns up we’ll call you”
Carter nodded and smiled at Fin who was quick to counter her action before taking off with Liv. She sighed and sat down at her new desk
-“Well this is less crowded than at Narcs, which is a good thing.”
Soon she stood up, she seemed as if she was trying to find her place but could not figure exactly what was going on.
-“I need to get my things from the car. I’ll be right back”
Elliot followed her as she took a few steps
-“I’ll help you out. Where’s your car?”
Nessa smiled and walked with him down to the parking lot. Men would literally stop what ever it was that they were doing and stared at her as they walked by. Some commented, she could hear them but could not make out what exactly it was that they were saying. Elliot did not seem bothered by this, he seemed almost happy and proud for some weird reason. Perhaps now that he was a free man he could get back in the hunt, and he became more or less a competition for all the others around him. Elliot thought little of this aspect and never really believed that he could recover quickly after his divorce. Soon they reached the car. Few words were spoken during this little walk down the building. Elliot pointed out some offices and people that she should remember but other than that it was pretty quiet.
-“This is it” she said and unlocked the Black 2002 Trans Am.
-“ Nice car” Elliot commented while grabbing a couple of boxes from the small trunk
-“Thank you, she is my pride and joy. “ she smiled and grabbed another box.
With a quick move she closed the door and locked the car.
-“Even thought I am a cop, I still like to hold a little bit of spark in this life of mine. So the car does come in handy for that purpose”
He nodded and cast an appreciative look over the machine and then over her behind as she walked in front of him and up the few steps. He found himself smiling at the way her body swayed, the way her hips danced with each move she made. He noticed that in women, at times even Olivia had that but unlike Liv, Vanessa was taller, more athletic and built like a goddess.
He dropped the boxes onto her desk and smiled
-“Here you go”
She nodded and lowered her own box onto the chair
-“Thanks Detective”
He quickly rose a hand and stopped her
-“No no.. Elliot. The Captain can call me Detective, but my partners call me Elliot”
With a smile the woman agreed and quickly spoke
-“Well then, call me Nessa, or Vanessa, which ever you prefer”
-“Need any help settling in ?” asked the man clearly willing to help out
-“Ohh no.. I can handle this. But I would appreciate some coffee”
- “I’ll go get it “ and with those words he turned around and went to the table where the coffee maker and the cups rested neatly.
She watched him for a few moments, watched him carry himself, watched him make small talk with another woman. She felt strange when she saw that but quickly dismissed it. Why was she even looking him over. It was so wrong. Vanessa returned quickly to unloading the boxes over on her desk, she sat everything in place, all organized . No photos of any family members, well except her parents.
-“Here you go.. black and hot. Guaranteed to wake you up from a coma” Elliot said and handed the coffee to her.
-“Hey thanks “ she replied and took the cup from his hand, fingers gently brushing- skin on skin-shivers- such strange sensations.
He leaned against the desk and looked over her photos with a smile. She just sat back and watched him. Perhaps this was going to be a good change for her.
Thank you for reading this. It means alot to me and i hope you liked it.
REVIEWS PLEASE. I love them. If you have ideas please let me know. Don't expect a PWP. I am sorry to dissapoint but this is not what i like to write. Let me know what you think. This way i can provide you with better writing.
NEXT CHAPTER-> Elliot and Nessa get a little to close for comfort.