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schedule
September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep me informed on any updates.
schedule
April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So what else was Dem Doing?
schedule
March 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly this is some of the most suspensefull stuff I've read, I really enjoyed this one. Please post more you have me hanging off my seat. If you're looking for any ideas I have a bunch. Great stuff :)
schedule
November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello.
Thank you for taking the time to read through the story. This is my first fic and i do take well to reviews.. as long as they are constructive and helpfull. It is now that i learned about the Mary Sue character type and all that stuff. To be honest i am trying to improve and deliver a real story, not just PWP. As the chapters go along the OC improves as well, or so i believe. It is not my intention to deliver a perfect OC which everyone loves... Take some time and read and you will find out new things about her. Some you will like, others you might despise.
If you have sugestions on how i can make this story better then please let me know. On that note i strongly advise you to read through the chapters and comunicate your thoughts.
Once more i thank you for your time and pacience.
Storm
Thank you for taking the time to read through the story. This is my first fic and i do take well to reviews.. as long as they are constructive and helpfull. It is now that i learned about the Mary Sue character type and all that stuff. To be honest i am trying to improve and deliver a real story, not just PWP. As the chapters go along the OC improves as well, or so i believe. It is not my intention to deliver a perfect OC which everyone loves... Take some time and read and you will find out new things about her. Some you will like, others you might despise.
If you have sugestions on how i can make this story better then please let me know. On that note i strongly advise you to read through the chapters and comunicate your thoughts.
Once more i thank you for your time and pacience.
Storm