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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Berta? I don't think so! Given your plans for the future, I'm rather glad you gave up. Safer to try Alan/Charlie or Jake/Charlie.
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March 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't do gay
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September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hah, wow, that was a lot hotter than I was expecting! I never thought of urethral sex before (except furry docking), wow, you have opened my eyes to a whole new kink. New kinks, best learning experience ever.
I also loved how Berta and Jake where the main characters here. I did not think that pairing would work but you made it seem OTP. I did have to laugh about Charlie and Alan double teaming Berta, pretty sure they wouldn't invite Alan to something like that hehe, but that's just how I view the characters.
In the way of suggestions, I can only encourage you to please continue exploring these more wild kinks/taboos. They're a lot of fun! I really enjoyed reading this story, thanks so much for posting it, and hopefully you'll feel inspired to do a continuation (or not, it's pretty damn hot as it stands!).
But you should move the story to the Two and a Half Men category instead of leaving it here in general! :D
I also loved how Berta and Jake where the main characters here. I did not think that pairing would work but you made it seem OTP. I did have to laugh about Charlie and Alan double teaming Berta, pretty sure they wouldn't invite Alan to something like that hehe, but that's just how I view the characters.
In the way of suggestions, I can only encourage you to please continue exploring these more wild kinks/taboos. They're a lot of fun! I really enjoyed reading this story, thanks so much for posting it, and hopefully you'll feel inspired to do a continuation (or not, it's pretty damn hot as it stands!).
But you should move the story to the Two and a Half Men category instead of leaving it here in general! :D
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! All these hits and no reviews! People are LAZY!
Anyway, I like what you have so far. This is a great start!
I only just recently started watching this show and didn't
even know it had fanfic. I look forward to seeing where you
take this! Thanks, and don't get discouraged.
Anyway, I like what you have so far. This is a great start!
I only just recently started watching this show and didn't
even know it had fanfic. I look forward to seeing where you
take this! Thanks, and don't get discouraged.
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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys, I'm the author. Don't be afraid to review! Good or bad, I'd like your input. Also taking ideas for future chapters. You can email suggestions to radiumeyes.aff@gmail.com
Hope you enjoyed the story. If you did, be sure to check out my other works.
Hope you enjoyed the story. If you did, be sure to check out my other works.