rate_review Reviews

Brilliant and fantastic, and oh so sad!! But loved it all the same :) ...did you notice that was the second time her clothing on the rail had a bit of an effect? Other time was in Bad Wolf when Jack spotted her jacket when he thought she'd died.

Anyway, brilliant fic, glad he finally figured out actions speak louder than words...especially since he never seems to get the words out!!

There are some slight errors that a good editor would catch, and I was very disappointed to see you skipped over the lovemaking (I mean, this IS *adult* fanfiction.net), but... oh, hell, I'm crying at the ending. Literally.

Good job at working with the emotional pain.

Cry! This was beautiful. Thank you!

RE: Chapter 1
Well written, I hate how they ripped Rose from the Doctor. 8-)

You're fired. You should not be able to write a story that so seamlessly fits into the show. You should not bring tears to my eyes. You should not have made me relive the pain of lossing Rose. You are so fired.

Suggestion for sequal: You could write about all of the thoughts the doctor would have when Rose talks about the baby. He could live through all of the possible futures he could have had with Rose and the baby in the blink of an eye.

My overall opinion: Brilliant. Five and a half stars.

Heartbreaking

I liked it. I didn't read it three or four times, but it definately was good. It seems to make sense, at least. Though, she might have just left her stuff on the Tardis. But, your explanation was much more entertaining! ^_^

beautifully done!!!!!