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for Explosive Revelation

by Dhiana

schedule January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Painful. Needs a good beta, and decent dialogue. Literally winced my way though it.
person Remetan
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Fluff! I enjoyed your story, but you should really put up a fluff warning for those of us who are unsuspecting and looking for angst...

However, nicely done. Thanks for sharing your tale!