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for Be Careful What You Wish For

by shelia452

person samrand
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo! What has he done? I want to know!!!! Brilliant. I love Clark and Chloe together. Boo to vanilla Lana.
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far but I get the feeling that Jor-el is not very happy with his son right now
More please. I don't know but I kind of like this, Chloe in love with one aspect of clark and that aspect loves her in return. Reminds me of an idea I had once maybe i'll actually get around to writing it one of these days

person morgannia
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
although i really do love this story, it's a bit erratic, the organization of chapters are confusing, but i do like this. i'll be looking for updates.
person CHLARK_LOVER
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT LAST CHAPTER WASS NICE...THE SEXUAL HEAT FROM THEM BOTH WAS FIRE...PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person CHLARK_LOVER
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I JUST LOVE IT...I LOVE TO SEE MORE STORIES WITH KAL-EL AND CHOLE