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by vinsmouse

person John
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neat build up, Bo is nervous, not surprised that Luke ain't really, but then again he ain't the nervous type, except if he's worried soemthing bad will hapepn to Bo, it is, but he don't know, so he ain't worried.

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person john
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now don't you just wish that Dean was there? He's mighty handy for possesions ike that, and when he's done with them, he can do a round of rock salt for our neighbours, because when I hear their music more than mine I get annoeyd.....

Good chapter though,

*hugs* John
person John
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, man they're both sufering pretty good there aren't they, poor boys, wher the heck is Dean where he should get his gears and get over there, ;)

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person john
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Meanie, lookie here, big bunch of salt and gasoline, who's got the marshmellows? because buddy, you're toast when I get ya.......

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person John
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil ghost, not only tortures, but tells secrests to, and you, you mention the one torture bothers me to read, ;) that's not very nice is it, ;)

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person John
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shhh, don't listen to him Bo, yer gonna get to meet them, it's just another story is all. ;)

Good story, I think I appreciated this more after having seen Dean in action, but I still wish you had picked a different kind of torture, can't not think about it, ;)

*hugs* John