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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS!
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good!
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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but it's just lame.
There are many mistakes in your story (grammar!) and you're shifting the point of view, the story has absolutely no logical connection and your dialogs are so poor, I wouldn't call them 'dialoges' anymore...
Bad story. Really bad.
There are many mistakes in your story (grammar!) and you're shifting the point of view, the story has absolutely no logical connection and your dialogs are so poor, I wouldn't call them 'dialoges' anymore...
Bad story. Really bad.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It could be Tristan too, but frnakly I hope it's not seeing as this author can't write for shit. You all ahve such low standards--pathetic, really.
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I read your story and I read the reivews to amke sure I wasn't the only one who didn't like this. Maybe the factt hat you have over 6,000 hits and only 10 reviews should tell you something. People open it to read and think it's crap. I agree 100%!
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September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Try to update soon!
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting idea, I like it. I'm not big on Rory much, but I like where your taking this. I hope you update soon and get to the dirty. Let's face it, that's the best part.
Wendy
Wendy
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You could do better. I'm not satisfied--no one should be, including you.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
way too short of an update!!
you could do better with this idea; i'm disappointed.
you could do better with this idea; i'm disappointed.
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so be dissapointed. I dont care its my story. I posted it cause i want to write it and want somewhere to post it.