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for RED K LOIS

by TwilightPro101

schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is more smut than plot but it's still good. ^^ It'd be nice if a relationship results from all this between Lois and Clark. You've definitely set it up well for the confrontation with Lana. I do wonder though about the extent of that guy with the weird name's power. How long will it last? Normally, people who are meteor freaks don't have much success affecting Clark with their abilities, but his worked quite well. Did he affect Lois too, or did she just morph into a slut from starting out as an investigator in the beginning? She was pretty rude with Chloe. I doubt Chloe would just run to Lex, spill her secrets about Clark, then give him a blow job. I also doubt that Lex would take all her news that seriously, considering her family history of mental issues. Either way though it could all work out and I am curious to see how it does.
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please finish this it was geting good
person Dade
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, sexy, but twisted. Is everybody going evil?
person Emeraldfires
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot!
person Carla
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this. Please continue.