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July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok what kind of life form is John turning into. I don't like the idea of John hurting Rodney. It's not like him. Please update again very soon. I really like this story.
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June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Write more , you got me Hooked and i cant stop checking to see if its updated XD
I cant wait too see whats next
good job
I cant wait too see whats next
good job
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*eye twtich* you mean author! You shouldn't leave off like that!! *grrrr* MORE!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o.... he's not human?! or is it just an impersonation of him???? JEEZ! Please update soon! PLEASE!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o... Well, I glas that you found this story again, and I really hope that things work out between the two... maybe Sheppard can get some help...
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February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Great Story. Constructive Criticism Mmmm. I don't know I like how its not a typical smut story where they fall into bed together and both (or all) feel fantastic. Maybe to improve it you could explain why McKay is terrified
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon... I hate seeing Rodney like this... *pout* pwetty pwease?
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really would like to see more of this, mostly because I'm desperately in love with angsty!Rodney.
Hmmm... My only other thoughts are that something must be wrong with John for him to be so mean...
Hmmm... My only other thoughts are that something must be wrong with John for him to be so mean...
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. Now am I imagining it or is there something you haven't yet told us about? Something that you're going to reveal in the next chapter? There will be another chapter, won't there??? Please don't leave us like this - I want to know more. As someone has already said, why is John being like this? Please post the next chapter sooooooon.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
criticism
Good Story and written well except (hope u don't take this the wrong way) it's a bit flat like it's written with no feeling in some parts. But saying that it is written in an extraordinary terms. I like this as much as i like your lost but not little boys. It makes you understand what rodney is going thru at this time but you don't really get a feel for it. i know theres other chapters to come and i look foreward to reading them. please do update and update your lost but not little boys because these two stories have the potential to become two of the best written in this fandom. Yo have a good sence of direction of where to take the plot and how to keep your reader intrested in what is happening.
hope i haven't been to rude or offended you because i do think your one of the best Rodney anst writers around on the net.
Good Story and written well except (hope u don't take this the wrong way) it's a bit flat like it's written with no feeling in some parts. But saying that it is written in an extraordinary terms. I like this as much as i like your lost but not little boys. It makes you understand what rodney is going thru at this time but you don't really get a feel for it. i know theres other chapters to come and i look foreward to reading them. please do update and update your lost but not little boys because these two stories have the potential to become two of the best written in this fandom. Yo have a good sence of direction of where to take the plot and how to keep your reader intrested in what is happening.
hope i haven't been to rude or offended you because i do think your one of the best Rodney anst writers around on the net.