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for Ever Wanted

by DonnaLynn

schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please carry on
person LondonLass
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my kind of fic! Really enjoyed it, especially the gym scene in chap. 2. Very much looking forward to Chapter 3.
Please write it soon!
person Tracy
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I have been waiting for an update for so long and I was surprised to see one! But I'm glad there was one; it's great and I can't wait for the next part!
person b5delenn
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like it a lot, more please. The teasing in the gym I love it, love the training scenes
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love all of your stories and this one is no exception. Excellent work !
person Tracy
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. I can't wait for you to continue.
person Victoria FE
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't feel this is an NC17 story. Its barely a Pg-13. NC17 means you have sex or extreme gore involved in the story. Since you don't actually give the characters any nookie, and nobody's body parts are flying out the window, this is NOT NC17.