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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute and sad... but with a happy ending! yay! i really lived it! thank you soooooo much! *hug*
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
verry cool but sawyers real name is james watch eppisode 15
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved this story. I really love Charlie/ Sawyer stories, but this one had a real back bone. Please write more!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Best Lost fic ever! Must...Have...More! o_O
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so this was the first Charlie/Sawyer fic I read (is it the only one out there? lol)...anyway, it was pretty good. There was a couple of places where it contradicted the show but it wasn't a bad thing (I believe they revealed Sawyer's real name later on in the show and it was James, but I'm not possitive. Honestly, I have a hard time looking at him as anything other than Sawyer!)
I read the reviews too, before I posted this and I wanted to say something about what 1/2 of the PKmaniancs said. First off, OOC means out of characters and, even though crying is OOC for Sawyer, I think that it did apply in this sense and added something to it. Pressure, it's a killer. I think maybe his attitude could use a little of adjustment, but it honestly wasn't THAT much of a problem.
The premise of the story was a great idea and I have to say that you handled it pretty well, so good job for you. Also, I liked your response to that review as well. Just wanted to say I think you handled it well. Wow, I wrote a lot. Look at that! Oh well. Hope I helped!
-ShadeofSolace
I read the reviews too, before I posted this and I wanted to say something about what 1/2 of the PKmaniancs said. First off, OOC means out of characters and, even though crying is OOC for Sawyer, I think that it did apply in this sense and added something to it. Pressure, it's a killer. I think maybe his attitude could use a little of adjustment, but it honestly wasn't THAT much of a problem.
The premise of the story was a great idea and I have to say that you handled it pretty well, so good job for you. Also, I liked your response to that review as well. Just wanted to say I think you handled it well. Wow, I wrote a lot. Look at that! Oh well. Hope I helped!
-ShadeofSolace
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely loved this as I am a MAJOR Sawyer- and Charlie-whore!!!!!!!
*squee*
I loved Sawyer's soft spots!! And I can't resist sobbing Charlie!! Thanks a lot!!
I absolutely loved this as I am a MAJOR Sawyer- and Charlie-whore!!!!!!!
*squee*
I loved Sawyer's soft spots!! And I can't resist sobbing Charlie!! Thanks a lot!!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. The Sawyer in the series a son of a b*tch and I love him for that, but I liked the sensitive side of him in this FF
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, sorry you didn't like it, you are the only one, btw(i have no clue what occ means, or whatever. so, i can't comment on that.). but well, it was my first lost ff, and perhaps even my last one. it's really interesting to get such "feedback", maybe someday I will get addicted to it. well, but if you didn't liek this one, maybe you like other stuff I wrote, just head over to the lord of the rings stars and rad some MONABOYD!!! that'S where the truth lies! *muahahahaha* and the smut! and the rape! and teh bondage! and the chains! *MUAHAHAHAHAHA* *coughs* *I know I'm sadistic* *coughs* maybe you can read them through and tell me what you don't like about them! XD
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.........*vomits*...reads some more...*Vomits again*....*groans in pain*...*dry heaves for a while*...
i'm sorry, that was really mean of me...but wow that was not all that good. it started out good, but then sawyer cried and it all went downhill from there. the idea wasn't that bad to start off with...but then they just kept getting further and further from their characters...especially sawyer... THEY WERE SO FUCKING OOC IT JUST RUINED THE WHOLE FUCKING THING. ...that was mean...but i feel so much better having said it. okay, i'm going to end this now because i think you get what i'm saying: the characters were completely ooc by the time you finished (mainly sawyer), and i didnt understand why they hell sawyer was in england for 20 years to begin with (wouldnt he have an english accent then?), and finally, it was a halfway decent idea gone wrong. i'm sorry i was so frank, but what can i say, i'm a total bitch and i couldnt just ignore this.
~Remember, stealing is illegal when you get caught~
Di AKA 1/2 of the PKmaniacs (the half that has a backbone, isn't a poser or a bulimicwhore *cough*Lillia*cough*)
i'm sorry, that was really mean of me...but wow that was not all that good. it started out good, but then sawyer cried and it all went downhill from there. the idea wasn't that bad to start off with...but then they just kept getting further and further from their characters...especially sawyer... THEY WERE SO FUCKING OOC IT JUST RUINED THE WHOLE FUCKING THING. ...that was mean...but i feel so much better having said it. okay, i'm going to end this now because i think you get what i'm saying: the characters were completely ooc by the time you finished (mainly sawyer), and i didnt understand why they hell sawyer was in england for 20 years to begin with (wouldnt he have an english accent then?), and finally, it was a halfway decent idea gone wrong. i'm sorry i was so frank, but what can i say, i'm a total bitch and i couldnt just ignore this.
~Remember, stealing is illegal when you get caught~
Di AKA 1/2 of the PKmaniacs (the half that has a backbone, isn't a poser or a bulimicwhore *cough*Lillia*cough*)
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I love this. Happy. You had me yelling at my computer. <3