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for All The Pretty Horses

by FadeToBlack

person Canis Lupus
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* *snicker some more* Hey, this was great! A bit short, but great. You've got a great writing style, *^^* That was now officially the first Smallville-FF I ever read... I think my favourite part was that of Lana's thoughts when she first realized it was Lex... *snicker* You got me sitting here in the University Library with a VERY big grin on my face, *^^* Though, Clark topping? I don't know... that boy is such a sub... *snicker* Well, he will be in my fanfiction (IF I ever get there, *^^* Er... Interested in betaing a Smallville-Harry Potter crossover with a touch of Buffy, too? Just thought I'd ask, I need an English native speaker beta...)
Well, bye! You made my day! *^^*
Lupus!
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW how sweet! This was a great story. If I were Lana and Whitney I would have left the spot either what a revelation for them both!. You wrote this so well. I like this very much.

Legaralover
person iheartgarystu
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT story, short but sweet and VERY hot. Thank you for writing it.