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for Pretty Burning

by KathrynAV

person Gloria
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! The plot mostly and the idea of Ren and Twitty being together... The words you used made the story oh so realistic and slightly romantic and sad. Please write another chapter or another story with ren and twitty soon!
person CaptainSolo
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... WOW.

This was sheerly amazing. Everything about it just... wow.

The words, the worry about who it was, the metaphors you used, the plot... gorgeous.

Don't stop here, go on. Please!
person EMILY
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. I adore this pairing and somehow you managed to get this situation... just right. Perfect ending. Good Job <3.
person Jaman
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, That was so great. I think you should continue because this would make the best fic!
person Danny
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic, is very good, please, I hope that you want to continue it, because is great!!!
person Silent_Aura
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing...you DEFINITELY have to continue. It was just awesome--you write so beautifully. =-)
person Lizbeth
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my gosh! This is a great fic, congratulations, I love it, really, is fantastic, I almost cried :____:
person Valessia
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry!Thats a good thing!I really liked this story,write more!
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing...really good job