schedule
June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I really like it! You should write more of this pairing :)
schedule
March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This didn't suck at all. I thought your descriptions were very well done and the passion behind it was as well. My only suggestion to you would've been to paragraph more and to seperate the lines of dialogue. Otherwise, good job!