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by ruzila

person EvaBrick
schedule December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW. Kick-ass, super-awesome story. :D

The dialogue is excellent; very believable.

I really hope you add some more. I'll be checking back. I'd love to see Amy give David the boot; I never liked him.
person keangal
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I swear to God is the best adult fanfic I have ever read. I don't know if it's the combination of Bruce and Amy that had me going or just your damn good writing skills.....it's both. How could you apologise for this. It is truly beautiful writing and how could you stop there. I need more...what happens after they awake and have to return to reality...don't rely on my feeble mind to finish this. Please more...more...more
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey... hope you will update soon, love that story. its very good !
person JTBJAB
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think madam i have discovered where i learnt my annoying knack at cliff hangers....you!

I cannot believe this chapter it is brilliant as are all your stories. But i can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully the site will allow you to update your other stories soon!

You have me holding my breath here!
person Kiana
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Ru,

This story is well worth the wait. I absolutely love your writing! Imagine...281 hits. Way to go! I guess people are interested in the "smut" . Hee! Hee!

Can' wait for the next chapter. Can you provide a timeframe of when to expect it? Please, please, please!!

Kiana :)
person Kels
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! this is some unbelievable talent you have displayed here chic.....HOT DAMN!! To make a long story short.....I'm rummaging through my desk drawer right now looking for a Dildo....(my BF isn't here...have to substitute) hell...I might even use a condom with it too.
person JTBJAB
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! I love this latest chapter!
person JTBJAB
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Ru
Kinda speechless after that! But wanting the next chapter soon! And thanx for the e-mail. Good luck with your writing!