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Sweet, hot and somehow angsty at the same time! Really got me wondering what was going on at the beginning of the story when Max seemed so unsure. Great job with the fic! Thanks for sharing!

That was really beautiful. And powerful. Her apprehension was almost palpable, but at the same time, you managed to capture the determination that is so true to her character. She really would want to regain control of her life after something so traumatizing, and it was so incrdible that she had someone like Alec to be that patient and accomodating. That was amazing writing.

Wow. That was hot. You should definitely keep up the good work.

This is a good job, it really gets across difficult emotions and conveys the message well. Very true to Alex and Max in canon. I like this fic for its unusual approach, just dont like how its all one big paragraph, makes it hard to read.

Well, that certainly wasn't what I expeced. But it was wonderfully done. The hesitation and determination on Max's part. The sweetness and tenderness on Alec's. It hink what I liked best about this fiction was you were able to let us know what the back story was without ever having to go into it. Great job sweetie!