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for Unexpected Honesty

by elerimc

person LunaKitty
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far, you are my fav. writer cause you wrote exactly the kind of story I wanted to read.. Please write more.
person Mars
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It's not often that I love a S/J story because most writers don't do them justice but this was one of the best I have read. Great job.
person Hazel Seven
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Sam and Jack stories,never tire of reading them.I enjoyed reading this one, especially as a good tie-in to the episode. You asked for comments; the only thing I would alter slightly is the layout of the writing.Have a separate line for the speech, it makes it flow better when you read it. Five stars.Brill.