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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very intense , i did like the different veiwpoints. i also have thought that Dylan was 'out there' .hope you finish this
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February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but it desperatly needs a Beta. Lots of typos.
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh, I'm really liking this story and then it stopped. Make it keep going please. Here I've frittered away a perfectly good Sunday afternoon reading it only to be left without closure. That's just badness. Please fix Rommie. Please allow Dylan a very humilating, public emotional and psychological breakdown after the Maru crew captures him and forces him to face up to his hurtful actions toward them and his destruction of Rommie. Please don't let Tyr rationalize his way into chickening out of getting it in on with Harper. Please give Harper some moments where he can be the strong one who saves the day. And then torture him some more. And then give him Tyr. Please, please, please, please keep going on this story. You're doing so greatd bed besides, it makes the universe sad when stories goinisinished....
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February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!!! OH OH OH, THAT IS JUST A HORRIBLE WAY TO END A CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!!!
The story line is awesome!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!
The story line is awesome!!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best slash fic in the entire fucking world!!! Meklorka rules!!! Now write more!!!