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by Crazy4ever

person munch
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lives up to its title. How about some more... please? And how about Munch gets some?
person Fin Fan
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could you please write more
person XChick03
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but you need to work on your formatting. When a person speaks, you always start a new paragraph. Go here for help ---> http://www.geocities.com/lcars1013/index.html
person Goddess Nemesis
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was great. I loved how John went all boss mode on them until they were sober. Please write more.
person Clover
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Wow" just about sums it up. More please?