rate_review Reviews

This is my favorite story on this site!
I love it,oh my gosh I hope Nicki doesn't try something stupid. Jane would be crushed, and it'll hurt their baby.:(
Please update soon!
I'm looking forward to it.

This is a grate story! hope to read more soon.

i love this story so much that i am gong to have to beg you to keep going i mean it please please keep going.The story is wonderfull

Universalseeker,
You have to write more!
You can't stop there!
Oh my God..this story is so great!
What is Richard up to?
They've got to tell Nikki about the BABY!
Nikki will love her new room.
There's sooooooooo much for you to write!

I'm so glad you (almost) posted this on Tarzan the series.
I never would have found it otherwise!

More PLEASE!!!!!! This is one of the best fics I have come across in a while.

Like i said before you are agreat writer just remember john has no clue what some things are he spent 18 years in the jungle but other than that i love it and keep writing

PLEASE!!! use a dictionary, there are many free online ones. or use the spell check feature on the computer, also have someone proof read your story andnt ont out the errors they find before posting online.
This will make the story more readable and enjoyable to your readers.

Some errors I caughre. re.

using the word Write instead of Right
using the word Waste as in garbage, instead you need to use Waist as in an area of the body
using the word To instead of Too as in I ate too much
using the word Where as in Where are we going to? Use the word We're which is a contraction for We Are

Just pointing out some spelling mistakes.

here are some dictionary links to use
http://www.m-w.com/dictionary.htm
Dictionary.com
www.yourdictionary.com
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/

I think that this is actually a very good story, very specific and very vivid which is good, please write more as soon as you can. ;)