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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was hot! A very great start in this fandom! I love this pairing, I just wish it was more of it!
Write more some time!
Legaralover
Write more some time!
Legaralover
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was good. That was really good! Too bad that that was all though. Wouldn't have minded another chapter or two. ;) Aside from that... well done! :)
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Miss. NightShade, i totally feel for your friends and the problems with the gym teacher. it has happened a few times to a friend of mine and her bio teacher, sick perv. anyways, i also like that you're promoting the good side of feminism which sry lry little understand. Well, getting back to reviewing...i love you story. Very orignal, and still in character for a total AU fan ficcie. I hope that you continue writing!!
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
that was so good! i love your stories keep it up~!
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
I have just one word for this chapter: YUM
*surreptitiously wipes drool off chin*
Also, even when it's being parodied, you make good fic.
*talking to self* Gee, I hope that made sense.
Anyways, more ASAP please.
Ja Ne,
CybrEm
*surreptitiously wipes drool off chin*
Also, even when it's being parodied, you make good fic.
*talking to self* Gee, I hope that made sense.
Anyways, more ASAP please.
Ja Ne,
CybrEm
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
It's good, but all the author's notes within the body of the story are REALLY annoying. They interrupt the flow of the story, and take away from the impact of the scenes. So, just stop doing that, and everything will be fine ^__^
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic and read it all and wow, this is just so great. i can't wait for more! I see "angel" is here, so I'm sensing some trouble coming but i have faith, and i can't wait to see what happens next!
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I was the huge pain your arse bugging you about the non con norri/will. Sorry if i annoyed you, although i'm secretly pleased to have got my own way;) So thanks for working it into the sequel! You can go to bed knowing you made a loser on the other side of the world a little bit happier today:)
Loved this part as per usual except your cliffhanger endings get crueler each time. Basically just love this whole story and have recently developed a really sad habit of dropping everything every time i see it's updated
Understandable, yes
Worrying, probably
so now i'm just gonna sit at my desk and wait for the sequel:)
Loved this part as per usual except your cliffhanger endings get crueler each time. Basically just love this whole story and have recently developed a really sad habit of dropping everything every time i see it's updated
Understandable, yes
Worrying, probably
so now i'm just gonna sit at my desk and wait for the sequel:)
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
it's over...
it was really really good!!!!!
it was really really good!!!!!
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January 19, 0000 at 12:00 AM
More please!!!!