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a girls night out

By: Claire1
folder M through R › McLeod's Daughters
Rating: Adult +
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a girls night out

detailed summary: the girls of drovers run are having a night out. they go to the pub which is owned by a nasty man called Brian Cronin. He raped becky a couple of months ago but they couldn't arrest him due to lack of evidence. the girls decide to catch him in the act. they use Meg to seduce him to try and catch him. but in my story it goes a little bit different...

LATE AT NIGHT IN THE GUNGELLAN PUB
It's been several hours since meg took her seat at the bar, where she did her best to make brian notice her. the only thing brian did was offering her a drink. but he did that to a lot of regular customers so it meant nothing. Tess, claire, becky and jodi just sat at their table watching as people around them joined karaoke or beer drinking games. They were pretty bored but they had to watch meg, that's the whole reason they were there. when they realized it was probably going to take the entire night they all booked a room there. suddenly claire broke the silence and said softly to the other girls "this is ridiculous, this isn't gonna work". she sighed "he's not making a move, I don't wanna stay here all night waiting for him to make one". "maybe he's not interested in meg after all" tess said agreeing with her sister. "Well, we can't just quit" becky answered disapointed. "yeah we really have to try and nail this bastard" jodi said. "alright, then you stay here and then you wake me if anything happens yeah?" claire said standing up from the table. "I'm tired and I've got a headache". "I'll see you guys later, and you can at least try to look like you're having fun". claire got up from the table and walked upstairs to go to her room. they watched her leave. "she's right" tess sighed. "we should at least try to have a little fun". "I could do some karaoke" jodi suddenly smiled. "I do a killer impression of mariah carey" "yeah! great" the girls said together. jodi got up and walked on stage. she told the dj her song and soon mariah carey sounded throughout the pub. Jodi started her singing and the girls finally started to have a little fun. meg got a little distracted by watching her daughter perform. she loved it when jodi sang. she was really proud of her. she joyfully watched her and slowly forgot to keep an eye on brian. Brian then walked to a collague of his and whispered in his ear "cover for me, be right back" his collague nodded and brian skillfully slipped out the bar. Meanwhile claire had made her way in the hotelroom. her headache faded and she enjoyed the peace and quiet. she removed her blouse and threw it over the chair. she wore the same thing she practically wore every day, jeans, sleeveless shirt and a blouse over that. she liked it that way. the room she and tess booked for the night wasn't that big. there was a dressoir with a large mirror above it. beside it stood a comfortable bed. behind the bed was a chair. and opposite of the bed stood a pretty large closet. simple, but nice. she lay on the bed relaxing her head a little when a knock on the door. she stood up smiling. 'that tess, just won't take no for an answer' claire thought. "miss me already!?" she said laughing when opening the door. she then froze. brian stood there leaning against the doorpost. claire didn't know what to do, she just stood there unable to move. "thought i was someone else did ya?" brian said with an evil grin on his face. "what are you doing here" she then said slowly closing the door. so he couldn't come in. "just came by to see if ya need anything love". "no, i'm fine, so thank you and goodbye" claire said with disgust in her voice. she almost closed the door, when brian jammed his foot in between. claire pushed harder, but then brian pushed the door open and claire stumbled backwards. brian quickly walked in and locked the door behind him. he did it all so fast claire didn't know what hit her. she slowly walked backwards as he approached her. "get out" claire said angry. "tess will be here any minute now". brian laughed "no she won't, she's too busy enjoying the karaoke downstairs". claire ran out of ideas and her mind started racing. "what do want from me" she then asked. "you think i don't know what you girls are doing". "trying to trick me?" "i'm not stupid claire, send meg as bait, as if i would fall for someone like meg". he eyed claire from top to bottom."now you claire, you're more my type of girl". "since the first time i saw you, i've always wanted you, those girls downstairs?, they don't even compare to you". claire backed up into the window frame and brian was closing the gap between them very slowly. "you raped becky, you bastard", she growled. "becky is a slut, everyone knows that, you have nothing against me, can't prove a damn thing" he smiled finally closing the gap. he moved like a predator approaching his prey. "now, gimme a little kiss" he whispered. he leaned in to her when claire suddenly kneed him in the groin. he buckled forward crying out in pain. she ran for the door, and tried to unlock it. suddenly she was shoved hard against the door, as he grabbed her upper arms from behind. she grunted from the pain. "play nice" he whispered in her ear giving it a little lick. he then swirled her around and pushed her again against the door still painfully holding her upper arms. he looked at her and he wanted her so bad. "you bastard let me go" she spat out while fighting back as much as she could."come on love gimme a little kiss" he said and closed in again. when their lips almost touched she spat him in the face. "get away from me" she said very angrily. he lost his temper and swirled her around so her back was facing the bed. and he backhanded her hard. the blow caused her to fall backwards onto the bed. her face was stinging and it hurt, but she tried to get up immediately. but he pushed her back onto the bed and quickly said on top her. "get of off me!" she shouted when at the same time she was punching him and scrathing him where ever she could. she frantically fought him, tried to buck him off. he was having a really hard time keeping her down, when he finally got a hold of her wrists and wrestled them over her head. she continued to fight him but then she got so tired, she couldn't anymore. "wow, you really are a wild one he ?!" brian said breathing heavily, worn out from his fight with claire. "Let me go, you won't get away with this!" she said. "why not?, i have before". "besides everyone thinks i'll take the bait with meg still sitting at the bar". "no one knows i'm here, and no one will believe you claire". suddenly there was a noise in the hallway. brian saw that claire was getting ready to scream, so he quickly placed both wrists in one hand and put his now free hand over her mouth. his hand muffled her screams. she moved her head trying to shake his hand off. she kept on trying but his hand was not going anywhere. the sound in the hallway got louder, and a couple of drunk guys passed by her room singing happy songs. the sound faded quickly. "nice try claire, you might as well enjoy this, this is gonna happen either way" he smiled at her. he removed his hand from her mouth and his hand then trailed down carressing her chin then down to her breasts. he softly let his hand slide over her breasts, cupping them. "don't do this brian, please" she said softly to him finally realizing she lost the fight. tears started to well up in her eyes. "this is not how i know you, you look like a sweet little girl now, not the fierce claire mcleod everyone knows". "please don't do this" she whispered again. realising he had won, he had this amazing girl all to himself it just turned him on more. his hand started squeezing her breasts harder and she let out a soft cry of pain. his hand trailed down to the hemp of her shirt and slid it upwards revealing her beautiful belly. and up further revealing her black bra. "oh my god you are so beautiful" he whispered. she got so scared that it gave her new strength and she tried to pull her wrists free. he got annoyed that she still didn't cooperate and he squeezed his hand tighter around her wrists. "aaah, it hurts, stop!" she shouted. the tears falling freely now. "then stop fighting me" he angrily said. "please stop" she whimpered again. he moved his hand over her bra and started carressing her breasts again. very slowly, enjoying the feeling of it. claire turned her head unable to look at him. she cried softly hoping her sister would come sooner. "wow jodi that was fantastic!" tess applauded. "i didn't know you were gonna do the entire album, but it was great" tess laughed. jodi got off the stage and joined her friends. "yes i know, i'm a talent" jodi smiled. Meg walked up to the girls and was complementing jodi on job well done. "what's the news on brian?" tess then asked meg. "i don't know" meg answered. "he didn't make a move, i don't think this is gonna work" she said disappointed looking at becky. "where is he now?" becky asked. "i don't know, haven't seen him in a while". "maybe he figured us out and ran for it" jodi said. "that's strange" tess pondered. "guys?, where's claire?" meg asked. "oh she went upstairs already, she was tired" jodi told her mother. suddenly all the girls looked shockingly at eachother. finally understanding the situation. they bolted out of the pub and upstairs to the hotelrooms. Meanwhile brian was savouring his time with claire. never had he seen such a beautiful woman, and now she was his for the taking. he left her breasts to unbuckle her belt. her shirt was still up over her bra. he quickly unbuckled it and started to unzip her pants. "no, stop!" claire yelled. she struggled again. no way was she gonna let him rape her. her wrists were all red and stinging from the pain but she didn't care anymore. she gave it all she got, wriggling underneath him trying to buck him off. he had opened her jeans so a little black of her underwear was showing. when he saw that he just wanted more he just wanted to be inside her so badly. but she made so damn difficult for him, she just wouldn't lay still. and then it pissed him of. he let go of her jeans and grabbed her throat. he squeezed hard enough for her to stop fighting him. she gasped for air. "for the last time, stop fighting me" he growled at her. suddenly tess, meg and becky kicked down the door. they all stumbled into the room. quickly regained themselves. and they were shocked of the sight in front of them. there he was the scumbag who likes to rape women, sitting on top of claire, her shirt up, her jeans open, his hands holding her down. tess almost fainted when she looked at the terrible sight before her. the tears in her sister's eyes, her eyes were so full of pain. suddenly she snapped. "get off my sister, you bastard!" she yelled when running towards the bed. the other two girls quickly followed. tess grabbed brian by his arm and yanked him of claire. the other girls helped and he fell hard onto the floor. claire then quickly adjusted her clothes and slid off the bed, unable to do much except to stare. then jodi came running in with two police men, who quickly ran towards brian and grabbed him by the arms yanking him onto his feet. the girls immediately went to claire to make sure she was alright. then they all watched as the polic men took brian away. brian and claire looked eachother in the eyes and then he said "we'll finish this some other time then" he smiled as he winked at her. claire quickly turned her head the other way. "take him away" becky said angry. the police men brought him to the police station and the girls went to take claire home. not much was said when they got home. they didn't know what to say. claire just lay alone on her bed staring in front of her. tess came in and lay beside her. "you okay" she asked softly while stroking her sister's hair. "no" claire hoarsely said, her voice rough from all the screaming. she continued to stare in front of her. "but i will be" claire said. then neither one of them said anything for the rest of the night. they slowly fell asleep. exhausted from a horrible night...