Finally

Disclaimer: I don't own Hollyoaks. Cheers for reminding me :(
This is the first story I've ever written so please give me some feedback so I know if I should keep writing or not. Thanks.

"Beka?" She had fellen into his arms crying the second she opened the door.
"Oh Justin. He left me. He's gone!" He tried to hide the smile that crept upon his face, he really did.
"It's OK. It's gonna be OK. I promise." She suddenly stopped crying and looked up into his eyes.
"You love me don't you?" It was more of a statement than a question.
"Beka, you know I do, but we agreed to be mates remember?"
"Only because of Jake, Justin please I just need... something. Make it go away Justin, make the pain stop." and she kissed him. Full of passion and need.
"Beka you don't want this. You said-" She never found out what she said as she kissed him again, this time her tounge slipping into his mouth and exploiring the warm moist cavern.
She grabbed his wrists and lead him to her bedroom, still kissing. So Jake didn't want her, Justin still did.
She pulled him ontop of her as his top was removed almost unnoticed by either.
He shouldn't be doing this, he knew that much, but so long. So long he had dreamt of this wished and prayed for it, and it was here.
He slipped his hads upder her top and pulled it over her head breaking the kiss for only a moment. She wasn't wearing a bra! This was all his dreams fantasies and more!
His hands cupped her breasts gently, the breast that had teased him through his school life, and pinched her tiny pink nipples ever so slightly, he'd never done this before didn't know if it would hurt her.
Her moans of pleasure answered his unspoken question and he broke the kiss to begin kissing and sucking his way down her soft neck to her luscious boobs. Oh not even his wildest fantasies could compare to this.
Beka was becoming impatient she wanted this, needed this, to know that someone wanted her, loved her. She ran her hands down his smooth body to the top of his jeans, no one would ever know how many times she had thought of this moment, every time her said he loved her.
She unzipped his jeans and pulled them off roughly, he was taking too long.
"Please Justin. Fuck me." He certainly didn't need to be told twice.
He pulled off her remaining clothes leaving her fully exposed to him.
"Fuck, Beka your more beautiful than I ever imagined!" He really ment it.
They were both naked, kissing and panting with need, he guided himself to her entrance.
"Beka, are you sure you want this?" She didn't answer. She flipped them both over so she was on top and impailed herself on him, almost screaming in pleasure.
"Oh god, Jay you feel so good." That was it, his virginity was gone
She began moving, bouncing ontop of him, slowly at first, but increasing her rythem until they were both so close in was unbearable. They came together.
"Oh BEKA!"
"Oh JAKE!"
That was when he realised.
The woman he loved with all his heart and soul, had used him. He was nothing to her, just something to ease her pain for a while.
She was now laying beside him, falling slowly into sleep, when he was sure she wouldn't notice, he stood and re-dressed.
"That's it Beka. Your not gonna use me again." At that moment he truely hated her, he would have given her everything she could ever want. But to her he was just a toy.
The tears filled his eyes as he let himself out.

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OK so what do you think? first ever story. Good start or not?