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Nina, it's me!

Title: Fantasy
Author: im_a_yogi
Author’s Website: www.geocities.com/im_a_yogi
Feedback: im_a_yogi@hotmail.com
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Nina/Jack
Spoilers: None
Summary: Pre-season 1. Jacmes mes over to surprise Nina...
Disclaimer: I want Jack and Nina for my artistic Swedish movie... Why can't I have them? Please, FOX?

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FANTASY

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Part Three - Nina, it's me!


He carefully picked the lock. It was harder and took him longer than he had thought - Nina had installed one hell of a lock!

It was almost 5:00 am. The night had been as eventless as the day and John and Jack had yawned their way through the hours talking about sports and whiskey. The last four hours had seemed to be the longest in his life and all he had been thinking about was sneaking into Nina’s apartment and get a little revenge for what she had done to him… Her teasing had driven him crazy tonight.

He was smiling as he silently closed the door behind him. A part of him knew he was doing something that could be very risky. Nina was a trained CTU-agent with a gun in the top drawer of the bedside table. If she thought he was a burglar she wouldn’t hesitate to shoot him but the satisfaction of being able to surprise her won over his usual cautiousness.

He walked through the hallway, listening carefully to any sound coming from her bedroom. He paused by the door. He heard her even breath from the bed and knew she was sleeping soundly. He started to unbutton his shirt and took of his shoes. He kept listening to her breath to make sure the sound of the zipper being pulled down didn’t wake her up.

Naked he started walking towards the bed, slowly and carefully, like a tiger stalking its prey.

Would she know it was him? Would she scream? Should he cover her mouth with his hand so that the neighbours didn’t hear her? Suddenly she moved and he realized she knew he was here. The thought of the gun in the drawer made him quickly throw himself on top of her and he covered her mouth to prevent her from screaming.

“Nina… it’s me…”

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She woke up and realized someone else was in the room. She lay absolutely still thinking of her options. Her hand started to move towards her bedside table when someone jumped her and held her down. It took her two seconds or less to understand it was Jack, even before he managed to whisper into her ear…

Of course it was Jack… She should have expected him to do something like this to get back at her. But it was still foolish of him. She decided to fight back and pulled a knee up and she heard him groan when it him hard in the thigh. She realized he was naked and kicked away the sheet and moved under him so that she could feel more of his skin against her.

Didn’t she know it was him? She had almost kneed him… But then she moved under him and he felt her naked body pressing against his and knew she was playing the game… He pinned her arms over her head with one hand and removed the hand from her mouth so that he could cover it with his own.

It was a violent kiss - she tried to get away from him now… twisting underneath him in a way that only turned him on more. He smiled and grabbed her hair, holding her head still. He could feel her breath on his face and he kissed her neck, giving her marks that would be clearly visible the next day…

She was moaning but she was still a little angry. A little voice in the back of her mind kept trying to warn her.

He was able to get into her apartment… She had too many secrets… She would have to be really careful from now on and never leave anything at home… and she would change the locks again, of course. And… she could have shot him…

She wanted to tell him but it had to wait - he was pushing inside her and all rational thoughts left her as he started a rhythm that almost drove her crazy. Deep, slow thrusts… He panted her name and kissed her before he slipped out of her and licked his way down her body. She could move her arms again and let her fingers run through his hair. His head was between her legs and she arched her back trying to get closer to him when she felt his tongue.

He knew he shouldn’t have sneaked up on her like this… He knew she was angry and that she wouldn’t let it go so he had to make it up to her right now. The kisses made her relax and she didn’t fight him anymore. He moved down her body, determined to try and make her forget… Her moans of pleasure and her hands tugging at his hair told him that he had succeeded – at least for the moment.

Her moans were getting louder and he felt her body tensing and her hand clutching his shoulder when she came.

He moved up, kissing his way back to her neck and then he leaned back and looked at her. She opened her eyes and he grinned.

“Am I forgiven…?”

She had to force back a smile… She would forgive him of course – eventually…

“Not yet, Jack”

“No?” Suddenly he thrust a finger inside her causing her to moan and bite her lip. “Then what do I have to do? Tell me!”

She gasped as he moved his finger inside her and she closed her eyes. “You know what I want, Jack…”

Her voice was hoarse with desire. He knew… but he loved it when she told him. “Tell me!” he growled and pushed another finger inside her.

She looked up, taking control again. “I think you need to cuff me, Jack… I know how to fight off men breaking into my apartment…”

He stared at her and didn’t understand what she meant at first. But then she smiled and moved and suddenly he was falling off the bed and she was running towards the door.

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