Loving Him

Disclaimer: I own nothing you see here unless you don't recognize it.

Warning: Graphic smut in this chapter.


Well, I said I wanted a review or two so I got one. I suppose that means I should really update. :-)

QM: Thanks for reviewing. I'm not 100 percent sure I know where this is going, but I really wanted to put something up that was Jack/Chloe because I haven't found anything either. I just love the idea of those two together.

Jack sat down on the bed next to Chloe as she sat up. "Chloe, are you telling me that you're a virgin?"

She sighed. "Don't make it sound like such a big deal. It's not like I'm some pure possible mother of a saint or anything."

He studied her face for a minute and then smiled. "Alright. I have to admit that I can't see you giving birth to a saint."

She rolled her eyes and smirked. "I guess I destroyed the mood..." She reached over to pull her nightgown to her and gasped lightly when Jack grabbed her hands. "Jack?"

"If you're sure you want this then I'd like to make this special for you."

Her eyes, usually filled with suspicion, softened. "It's with you. That's special enough."

There hands remained linked as Jack caught her lips again in a gentle kiss. The soft sucking at Chloe's lower lip pulled a moan from her throat. He finally released her hands so he could tangle his fingers in the softness of her freshly drying hair. He groaned in response as her hands slid up his chest, caressing his nipples on their way up to loop around his neck.

At the sound, she moved her hands back down again and continued to caress his rapidly hardening buds until he tightened his grip on her hair and pulled her back just enough so he could rest his forehead against hers. "Keep that up and I'm not going to be able to do this how I want."

She tried to catch her breath and moved her hands until they were resting on his waistband. "Are you trying to tell me that Jack Bauer isn't always in control after all?" She twirled the soft blonde hair between his navel and his waistband around her finger and tugged gently. "I don't know everything that I want, but right now...I want your clothes off."

He chuckled. "I guess I do have you at a disadvantage. First...why don't I repay the favor that I owe you?"

"Favor?" Her look of confusion was wiped away by a look of ecstasy as she gasped and bit down on her lower lip. He had begun to caress her breasts like she had just caressed him moments before. She fell back on the bed and he followed, his lips finding a sensitive spot on her neck. She moaned and arched up against his hands. "Jack....what are you doing to me?"

He pulled away so he could look into her eyes, but they were tightly closed. He grinned. "Open your eyes, Chloe."

She did as she was told and smiled when she saw him. For a moment everything made sense and the private little world they had created in her bedroom seemed to be the only world in existence. Everything else melted away and the two just laid there and smiled at each other as if sharing a private joke.

Jack broke the gaze and lowered his head, capturing one dusky rose nipple in his mouth. Chloe whimpered slightly and placed her hands in back of his head, urging him on. He felt himself straining hard against his jeans at her reaction and lifted his head just enough so that he could use just his tongue to stimulate her. He noticed that her breathing had changed to panting and he smiled as he moved to offer the same attention to her other breast.

After a few minutes, she pushed at him. "Wait, Jack. Shouldn't I-? I mean, shouldn't I be doing something to you?"

He propped himself up on one elbow and studied her. "Only if you want to. I'm enjoying your reactions to me. It's an ego booster." He winked.

She rolled over and pushed against his shoulder so that he was on his back and then began to kiss his neck. Her kisses were awkward, but the innocence of them nearly had Jack wanting to rip off her panties and fuck her senseless. He forced himself to regain control of his libido and rubbed her back gently while she continued to lean over him. He jerked when she stuck her tongue into his navel. "Damn it, Chloe...you're way too good at this..."

She sat up and smiled shyly. "I just wanted to make you feel like you were making me feel."

He was about to sit up when she shook her head. "Chloe?"

"I'm not finished..."

She pulled the button free on his jeans and stared at the newly exposed skin. It wasn't much, but there was something tangible about the line that she was about to cross and she wanted to make sure that she savored every minute. She stroked the soft flesh a bit and then unzipped him slowly, moaning as she revealed the outling of his erection against his boxers. "I've never seen...."

Jack reached up and brushed her hair from her eyes. "Don't be scared. I'm not going to hurt you. I'd never hurt you...you know that, don't you?"

She nodded. "Help me do this..."

The two of them managed to get his jeans completely off and then his boxers. Chloe had purposely avoided looking directly at his penis until he was lying back on the bed again. She had planned on glancing quickly, but found herself mesmerized by the sight.

His cock was larger than she thought it would be and darker than the rest of his body from the blood flow. The head was weeping precum and she was shocked at how soft the blonde curls at the base looked. She couldn't help reaching out and caressing the pubic hair and smiled when Jack moaned again. She recognized the sound. Jack had made it before when he was on a mission and was so close to getting something he wanted just to be denied. So...what is it that he wants?

She wrapped her hand around him and pulled up gently. Hmmm. He definitely likes that. She began to touch and caress, getting used to the feel of him. At one point she stopped and spent a lot of time on the underside of his penis near the head. It was extremely soft and she was enjoying stroking the area over and over again. She was about to comment to Jack how amazing the sensation was when she realized that he was the one who now had his eyes closed tightly. Control...he's still got it... A decidedly evil thought crossed her mind and she knew she wanted to take the next step. She quietly leaned forward and licked the precum off of him, dragging her tongue right up the weeping slit.

Jack yelped and nearly fell off of the bed. If Chloe hadn't moved her hands to steady his hips he was sure that he would have suffered a nasty fall. His eyes opened wide and he lifted up, not willing to miss the sight of Chloe sucking his dick. He watched as she took the head into her mouth and just held it there. When she started suckling softly he knew he was in trouble. He was about to tell her to stop when she deep throated him. He moaned loudly and called her name and then gripped her hair to move her up and down on him.

Chloe found that she loved the sensation. She wasn't a complete idiot. She knew the biology of sex and what happened when a man and a woman made love, but actually doing it was something altogether different. Her mind started to wander and silly questions sprang to the forefront. Should I do this until he cums? If I do should I swallow it? What's the most polite thing to do here? I wonder what it tastes like...

Her decisions made she pulled his hands from her hair when he tried to pull her off. She increased her sucking and movements until he let out a strangled cry and came hard. She was so intent on not stopping that she swallowed his cum down as he poured it into her mouth. When she was sure that he was finished, she slowly sat up and licked her lips. "I liked that..."

He groaned and pulled her back down to him. "You're amazing..." He kissed her hard when she rolled her eyes at the comment and pushed her onto her back. "I could stay here forever."

"That's not very practical." She smiled at him and then frowned in confusion as he kissed her between her breasts. A bit of hope flared in her mind, but she extinguished it. I thought most men were selfish and didn't do that even if the woman does it for him... She was proven wrong as his lips reached the edge of her panties. "Jack...you don't have to..."

He ignored her and pulled her until her crotch was even with the edge of the bed. He knelt on the floor and buried his face in her silk clad pussy. The smell coming off of her was pure heaven. Not flowers and not anything ridiculously cliche like that, but just sex. It was feminine and raw and Jack knew he'd willingly drown in it. His tongue darted out to add to the wetness there and he felt her legs tremble slightly. As much as he wanted to just rip the fabric off, he knew that it would bring back memories that she couldn't handle.

He sat back and gently removed the panties. Oh shit...she does that trimming stuff...I'm never going to leave this fucking apartment. He stood up and moved her again so that she was lying in the middle of the bed. He laid on his stomach and hooked his arms under her legs. Then he rested on his elbows and lowered his face until he was caressing her short pubic hairs with his stubbled cheek. "You're so beautiful."

"Jack...please..."

He smiled and used his nose to open her a bit further before he pushed his tongue inside of her. He began slow circles with his tongue and waited to guage her reactions. It wasn't long before she was rotating her hips in agony. He knew that she was desperate for something else and he was as well. He pulled up a bit and tongued her clit lightly. Her scream of pleasure threw the idea of slowness out the window and he began to suck gently on her hardening clitoris. While he continued the constant sucking, he used his tongue to flick the hardened flesh softly over and over again. He pushed a finger into her and moved it back and forth until she was thrusting against his face. He hooked his finger and she began to scream his name as she came. She was trying to come down from her high, but he wouldn't allow it. He didn't stop and soon she was building again to a mind shattering orgasm. After the third time she was sobbing in pleasure and begging him to take her.

He trailed his tongue up her body and kissed her tears away. "I'm sorry..."

"No...it was wonderful. Too wonderful. I don't want this to end. I don't want you to go."

He nodded in understanding, but refused to promise her things that he wasn't sure of yet. He was happy to be so rock hard again, though, and was finally ready to make love to her like he wanted to. "I want to be inside of you, Chloe. Are you ready?"

She smiled. "I've been ready..."

"Are you scared?"

"Never, Jack...Never of you..." She put her arms around his neck and opened her legs more to cradle his hips with her own.

He began to slowly enter her and stopped as he encountered her barrier. "There's going to be some pain, baby...Just hold onto me..."

She nodded and looked into his eyes. She felt that this moment was one that they both needed to be focused on and she didn't want to close her eyes and then open them to find that it was all a dream.

He thrust forward quickly and winced at her scream of pain. He stayed very still and kissed the tip of her nose. "Please don't cry. We can stop..."

"No! Just give me a minute. You're so...I mean I feel so full..."

He took a deep breath and slowly let it out. Her warmth and tightness were going to be his undoing and he wanted to move so badly. He gasped as she began moving first.

"Oh! Jack...that feels really good...." She moaned and continued to move.

He took his cue and began to thrust into her. He pulled her hips up enough that her clit hit his pubic bone every time.

"Chloe...you feel so good...I want to see you cum for me...."

She sighed happily as she felt the orgasm building once more. "Yes, Jack...please...more...." She shifted a bit and moved her own hand between them to rub her clit. "I'm gonna cum...I'm gonna cum....Shit..."

Jack couldn't hold on for much longer at the thought of what she was doing with her hand. He sped up his movements and angled so he was hitting her most sensitive spot every time.

"Yeah, baby...yeah...." She screamed as her orgasm broke over her in waves. Her legs shivered violently and her body arched up as her hand fell away from where their bodies were joined.

As she tightened and convulsed around him, he groaned in pleasure and came inside of her, flooding her and nearly causing him to pass out. He laid there for a few moments and pulled her sweaty hair away from her face. "Wow..."

She smiled at him sleepily. "Yeah, wow..." She wiggled a bit and he slowly pulled out of her, causing her to gasp. She turned on her side and curled up. "I'm so tired."

He grinned and pulled the covers out from under her before tucking her in. He shook his head in wonder at what had just happened. He was thinking he should leave, but couldn't bring himself to do it. He told himself it was because he didn't want to hurt her feelings, but he had a sneaking suspicion that he didn't want to leave her because of his own feelings. He went into the bathroom and let some warm water soak a washcloth. He walked back out and pulled back the covers long enough to carefully clean off her thighs. He frowned at the blood, but knew that it was a necessary evil of losing one's virginity.

She sighed as she felt herself being cleaned. "You're too perfect..."

He laughed lightly and went into the bathroom to clean himself and then crawled into bed with her. "Is it okay if I stay?"

She nodded and curled against him.

He wrapped his arms around her and smiled as a thought came to him before he drifted off.

I'm going to castrate that motherfucker who tried to take what was mine.


TBC....