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for Its a normal day at the 4077

by sonyiaa

person Kidwyn
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good plot and set up. Speaking parts need to be set apart with quotes and correct capitalization/punctuation. Nurse Eddie?? not really Frank's type. How about Nurse Kelly - the 'hotsy-totsy' from the birthday episode. Keep up the good work, it'lle toe together.