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by Brianya

person anon
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"We still have to wait for Gordo." Lol!
person ella
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i liked it, evem though i'm not a lesbian, bi, or a lizzie fan..... i hope u continue and write about what happens when Gordo get there...
person Liquid Snake
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely ass kicking! I love it! More, more, more, more, more! The best lesbian fic I've read in a long time. Add one in with Gordo, and try to make a series out of it! Great job!
person reini
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was a great fic keep writing
person lordanur
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great
person K L
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You should write the one with Gordo!
I think it would be really good.
If you do, let me know the title!
person M
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved Sweet Sexy Sleepover! Keep on it!
Plz email me back!
person Ducky
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story.....but when's gordo coming??
person Oeter Magic
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story
person Alissa
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story is really good! I'm getting excited reading it! you have a talent!
you do a wonderful job at getting inside each characters head.
plus the way you describe how they think and such is perfect.
you should get into scripts or something.
You would do really good at making ppl understand or feel what a character is going through...
it sounds like a pro wrote it or someone who was actually writing what they experienced ;-)