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by Brianya

person Chris
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Given the interval since you posted, I assume you've given up on part twwo? Pity.
person LOVER
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was good but you didn't really write about the true chacter i mean like it would be better if they were like themsleves more! but it was exciting!
person nika
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
r u gonna make another?
person trekky89
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good, but I think you spent too much time on the foreplay, and rushed through the sex scene.

Cheers,
Trekky
person Secret
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LUV IT! Lolz,We still have to wait for Gordo! Lmao,Bloody Brillant work mate! I'm Luvin it,I'm not much of a f/f slash person i'm more of a M/M! So u r a REALLY good writer to make me horny to. I'm Bi so it works a WHOLE LOT! Lolz,Peace.
person Chamer
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHY DIDN'T YOU EVER FINISH IT? it's like you teased and teased and teased and never finished us, the readers, off.
person love
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
KEEP WRITTING i have gota find out what happends next
person kiera
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I loved your Lizzie/Miranda fic. It aroused a few of my, ahem, interests, lol. I'm not a les or nothin, but Bi... then again, that is kinda les huh? Anywho, I'm rambling on, but good work on it. I've always wanted to do something like that with my girl friends, particularly my one BFF. Keep at it!
person ShinigamiZero16
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the exact same story and title as one i read on fanfiction.net, eccept it was about Card Captor Sakura instead of Lizzie. I just hope that you are the same person who wrote this and didnt copy it.
person Angie
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tha was so good but when are you going to bring Gordo in it would be fun