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for Untie Me

by Zarbettu

person breathlessnight
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please you cant leave it like that!!! I want more, I´ll be precious to see Lex reactions after making out with clark
person Kristin
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOA THERE! that was kick ass... do another one... PLEASE...
person Viper
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can I just ask- what perspective is this story written in? Seriously people- I don't know. When I started into the story itself, I thought I was reading a description of what was to come. Is that a bad thing? I don't even know any more. I mean, I honestly don't want to flame, being a writer myself and knowing how much it hurts- but don't you care? Yours wearily, evil nasty flaming Viper.
person Katkim
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Guh. Fogging-up-my-screen-guh. Fin? I hope not. Long live DomClark and TiedupLex
person wishland
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yow! That's hot stuff, but you ca lea leave it there! More, please.
person SailorAurora
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yess... I want more! must add chapter 2 so that Ican find out what else happens.. or else I'm coming up there to toture you :D