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for Kiss of Betrayal

by LyssieGirl

person Anon
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person joslynn
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh!! that was super good.... if that was made an episode it would be my favourite.
gosh its the best........ i even cryed a couple of times. gosh i love your idea.
the romance was perfect a mean it didn't have drama and too romantic..........(somtimes corny)
but many compliments. i encourage you to write your own book..... your characters.... it'd b the best.
byE *^*^* jOslyNn
person lorilei
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was not thoroughly impressed with this. It was admirable writting, but I could only get through 4 chapters before completely disagreeing with the decided portrayal of Cole, he was pure evil, He never got angry, he just got even, calmly.
person Coolestchick8000
schedule March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic.