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Oh my gosh, this is SO good. I'm literally shaking with excitement to read the next chapter! I can't wait to see Phoebe stick it to Prue...both metaphorically and physically speaking. Amaing, amazing, amazing!! (And Prue will deserve every minute of what's coming to her, and then some.)

Oh my gosh! That was so hot! I really hope Phoebe does find a way to make her depraved fantasy of knocking Prue up come true. It would be the ultimate revenge, to make Prue go through the pain of labor to bare Phoebe's child. Only to have to suck Phoebe's pussy when it's all said and done. Please update!

Oh, I gotta say, I wasn't expecting some girl on guy action. But that was even hot as hell. I mean, the image of Piper fucking that bottle with the candle sticking out of her ass? I bet that bottle was full by the time she was done. I was almost expecting her to pour it out and drink it up. And then Jeremy exploding on her while she was having her orgasm? Fuckin' brilliant. I can't wait for her and Phoebe to get at it, though!

I just read this and I want you to keep it up. I love it.

omg i LOVE it! its my secret...very secert pleasure! when is the next chapter coming?

If you watch Charmed and you are practically as hard as a rock, then this is the perfect release!

Someone write chapter 4 where prue fully submits to Phoebe, Piper is very turned on by the truth and all three charmed ones fuck!

And ofcourse the writer love this fic so fukin hot need a great fuck and please just stay with the Halliwell sisters!

Hey, I just came across this story and just HAD to say; very well done.
This is very well written and damn hot. I especially like how clean it’s written. Which that I mean, there are people that wire stories and than use words like ‘cunt’ so often that is seems that they get a dollar for every time they mention it. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t have a problem with words like that; if I did, I would be reading stories here. :D But I think that words (of any kind) should be used when it’s right to use them, and not simply when there is a opportunity to put them in. You managed that very well. So, good story, and well written.

Now, since this is called a review, let me also mention one minus. The boldly written ‘whack’ that at some points even grew out to a ‘WHACKKKK!!!!!’ After having red it in bold once or twice, I get the get that it’s hard and not just a slap. I would suggest using the bold only once or twice when a spanking session stars. You already have build in the hits getting harder by adding the extra letters and the exclamation marks. They really don’t also need to be cold on top of that.

Now, lastly, I think you can take the fact that this is my only negative comment as a testimony as to how much I like this story.
Well done indeed. And I sure hope that you’ll get around to finishing it at some point.

Well, well... what can I say other than "It's been a while"...? A while since I've last checked back to see if you've posted new or updated ongoing stories; a while since you've updated this story... The good thing is, taking off some time from writing doesn't seem to affect your creativity at all - Chapter 3b is a great addition to what pretty much is my favorite story of yours (and I've read them all, you know that). I really like the idea of the story and even though I don't remember Prue's character that much (hey, it's been 6 years since she's been on Charmed!), trying to break in a naturally dominant or domineering person is always good stuff for a story.

Look forward to reading more of this!