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for Charmed Tales - 01 - Growing Pains

by Oric13

person Anonymous
schedule April 19, 2022 at 12:00 AM
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person Clay Holland
schedule August 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
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person Ariel
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sexy, smooth, almost comical from time to time; loving it.

I just noticed that you also wrote quite a few other spanking femmeslash, all of which are of very high quality. Thank you, those are good read for the smut as well as, um, reads.

If anything though, I think it's a good idea to tune down the sex noise a little. Show, don't tell, because I kinda laughed at the Two Naughty Girls chapter at the very end where I don't think it's meant to be comical. But hey, you are a great author anyway.

Thanks dude!
person Oric13
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Samantha is a character I came up with myself. And as readers of my Charmed Tales know, I love dominant Prue :)

Thanks for reviewing.
person Emanuel
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one! I can't remember who Samantha is, but then again I don't think she is that important. Nice concept, Prue as the domineering big sis. Look forward to reading the next tales!
person Censor
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GROSS!!! This is child porn!
person Aveline
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this didn't get any reviews! *shakes head* I simply adore all your stories. You are a fantastic writer!