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person Vampireb7§ ¶
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is fabulous, i think greg is fab and now he has a playmate much fun can be had :) I nearly fell off my chair laughing when i read the 'pinky anf the brain' bit - it makes so much sense. The way you started on a fairly background case to show her skill at the beginning and then bringing on a big one later works really and the fact that she could be involved on both sides is a great twist. my only disppointment is that Grissom doesn't feature too much, but i suppose it can't always have him up front.
Thanx for the story,
Luv vampirebunny
person clonesofconfusion
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, really looking forward to the next chapters of this story. We always enjoy your work, Scribe. Your stories are always well thought out and vivid. We love the details, the descriptions, the way you stay ever-so-true to the characters, its just fantastic. We just wanted you to know how much we like this, we check for updates every other day. Please keep up the excellent work.

thaagaiagain, Bravo and Charlie
person karisma
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... I feel like I'm in a horror movie audience... WATCH OUT, GIRL!!! great stuff. And stick it to Sidecar whenever you can ! :)
person macgyver70
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking it...nice writing...please continue
person clonesofconfusion
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that is sooo funny, we just kept giggling!!!! This has got to be the best CSI fic WE have ever read!!!!!! also, do you mind if We have some of your stories on our rec. reading? We hope not, as we really really really love your writing. love and begging for more, Charlie and Bravo