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person Wicked_HP_Luver
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scribe! *bows down* Greggo! A Greggo fic! Right when I was watching a CSI marathon! You rule! I LOVED this, a chocolate covered Greg is the absolute dream! *wipes drool* Very cool if I haven't said so already lol, bring on more Greggy goodness, pwetty pwease? Wif a chocolate covered cherry on top?
~~~Merry~~~
person Raija
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love you...and this story. Where exactly you get your ideas? No,wait I don't want to know-I would be too scared of you told me. Fabolous story...but please update soon.
person Anon
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great!!!!!!....The mouse in the pants was so funny, incidently I've done that but I used a fake mouse...my friend freaked and started screaming too!
person maya_bee
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Welcome to Las Vegas, motherhumper."

Oh, I loved that. A lot.

I am ANXIOUSLY waiting for more, because this is one kick-ass piece of literature.
person Alice
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Yay for humiliating vegnance. I hate evil computer nerds. I heart nerds, but the evil ones suck. Very good chapter, I liked the development of Giorgi, even if he is developing into a major asshole.
person sufferingzombie
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, I really like it a lot. Please continue it, you're doing great!
person Raija
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This really is something else. I have read all kind of stories....most of them were ok which in my vocabulary is the biggest insult one can have. I like the way you picture Moezell but should I scared that I recocnize some of her in me? I wonder why there ain't more stories that has Sara being an annoying wench? I strongly dislike her and it is one of the reasons I like your story. You use the kind of humor that I like and there's a plot too. some authors lose that along the way. But I guess that what I am trying to say that this is bloody brilliant (if you excuse me for using something so Harry Potter-ish) and I'll hold my breat until the next update.
person Sony Gemkuna
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...I re-read it many times. I'm quite happy you have updated, and now to re-read it again.
person Alice
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should call these chapters "Mozelle bops the man!" By the way, I don't suppose you could mention Lady Heather in this, could you? LOL, just kidding, but my friends and I are adament (my spelling suck... sorry) that Grissom should be with Lady Heather, because they rock. And I commend you one your use of Lily Tomlin- she's the signiture on my email account. Also, I really like you depiction of Greg, it really works and now, if it is possible, I heart him even more *throws confetti at Scribe*
person Katie
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
December can't come fast enough. I love this story. It is so nice to see greg so smitten with someone and she returns the feeling. keep it up !! good thing going here.