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Dear gods yes. I swear this is one of the best written stories I've read in a while. And trust me i read a lot. Some one give this woman a medal. And sorry to hear about the historectomy. My mom had one and she said it was a bitch. Anyway I hope you get better soon. Ja ne.

I ADORE Mozelle-hope I'm spelling her name right- and would luv to be friends with her! No one can write like you, Scribe, you write stories I keep coming back to and enjoy finding new work. This new addition about the online author stalker really touches home with me, not personally, but because I'm a writer too and have heard about this happening to others, fans becoming obsessed... scary. It just seems personally because I'm a writer. But anyway, I adore this story, Mozelle making fun of Sara Suicidle, as I like to call her, the uptight bitch, flirting with that little hotty Greg, he's really overlooked in the show and should stick to the lab where he's awesome. My sis recimended this fic and I'm glad I came. But really I usually give anything by you a chance 'cause you do great work. ...Well, I won't touch your 'Winny the poo' slash fics 'cause.... uh, oh boy.. Anyway, I look forward to finishing reading the remaining chapters and i hope I can start on that other fic of yours where Spike becomes human and can't remember. I luv a shy and sweet William! ^_^

I have to start off with good story. I'm loving it. I usually don't like when an original character is inserted into a situation, or tv show with the designated characters, but I will admit I love Mozelle. I'm also enjoying Sarah's attitude towards her and her attutide back. I laugh every time I see her name changed, and it just keeps getting funnier. I'm always amazed when people, writers, can capture someone so well that you are picturing this as an actual episode, not just a text on the screen. Good job again, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

~Wynter

It is about time someone wrote a good story centering around Greg. I think he is an absaolute hottie. Way to go, I am loving this. Keep it going. And I love the plays on Sara's and everyone's names. Funny. Lol.

I love this story! I think that when people write fics about Greg they automatically pair him with Sara, but I think most people don't realize that Sara is in love with Grissom and is too moody for someone as happy go lucky as Greg. I love your style of writing and I love your sense of humour. The plot is also interesting to follow, but I think my favourite part is when Mozell keeps calling Sara sidewalk, or sidecar.... awesome, lol. Keep writing, it's fantastic! :D

I love this story! It's wistful, clever, yet grounded. I just recently got into the CSI-verse, and your story made me stay up til four in the morning! The characters are so well developed and appealing, and you have some great zingers. I kept chortling while reading this until finally my roommate threw a pillow at me! You inspire me to start writing fanfic instead of just reading it. And of course I'm completely infactuated with greg! ^_^

I have to let you know that I love your story. I am also writing a CSI fic, Greg and OC, and I think your story has a great plot and is really well written. If you have any recommendataions for good CSI fics in other places, please email me. Thanks a lot!

Scribe this is an awesome fic u have going on
i found it today and read everything u had
i loved it!!!!!
i hope u update soon

PS
and thank you so much for being one of the few ppl
who dont always make greg gay

Excellent!
Please keep it up! I havent read this for a while...i think the last time i read it the last chapter was chocolate. Its getting really good and i cant wait to see what happens! i loved gomez and tish!
later!
specialphreak~

First of all, thank you. Mozell's timing is hilarious. Sometimes I just cried )) But all her jokes are the same, this gets reeeeally old. She is very funny in the beginning but by the end her sarcasm is old and very annoying. And story line is too predictable even for a marysue like this. I think this chapter will be the last for me, I'm sorry. And believe me I really am. All this 'sidle-something-or-other' thing makes me wonder if whole Sara's reaction and Moe/Greg ship... well, at least going somewhere. But unfortunately it's not. Too bad for me (( One perspective story down...