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Aaarrrggh! Oh no! I can't wait for the next chapter! This story has me holding my breath! Wonderful plot... and I LOVE Mo's attitude, she's my kinda woman!

I imagine someone as strong-willed as her won't wait around for the feebs and who-all to approve her getting a weapon, will she? She's a sly one, that one!

Anyways, home-made chocolate chip oatmeal cookies for you! (they're gluten-free, too!)

-Sarah

Scribe, I just wanted to let you know how much I adore this story. This was one of the first stories on this site that I read back when I was new to fan fiction. I was so new that I had no idea what a Mary Sue was, which was probably a good thing since I didn't have any preconsieved notions about "oMg EvIL Mary Sue!!111".

From the first chapter I was totally hooked on this story, and couldn't stop reading until I had read all the chapters you had up. I then went directly to your website and read through most of the work you have there. You are the person that introduced me to pairings like Jim and Blair, Cupid and Strife, & Joxer and Ares. I can't thank you enough for that. I've really come to admire your writing talent and humor.

Thank you for a great read, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

Some people may hate OC's, but I happen to luv your Mozell! She's the kind of gal I'd like to have as a friend, and she and Greg are just so cool together. So far this is the only Mozell staring fic I've read, but there's just something 'bout this that always makes me laugh. And the fact that the overlooked cutie, geekchic Greg is a main character in the story is a plus. But hey, maybe it's a plus he's overlooked in the show. Have you seen what's been done to cool secondary characters like Xander baby and Wesley from Buffy/Angel? Pisses me off. Anyhoo, back to the story at hand... Even though Sarah's an annoying little bitch, I genuinely enjoy how the staring cast of CSI is in character, but with that wonderful Scibe flare that keeps me coming back for more. I could end my review by saying I can't wait to read more, but after the creeping stalker motherfucker in your fic, I won't. Just that I can't wait to be graced by more chapters. P.S. I totally can understand what Mozell goes through as a made up author, but author none the less because I'm sure we've all gone through it in one way or another. When I posted a fic at fanfiction.net, a Kaworu/Shingi where the boys got involved with eachother like a porn movie with dirty talk, most of my reviews were flames! I even had one nutcase remark in their review that I've over stayed my welcome on earth!! OMI&^$#GOD!! And when I removed that flame, they left another bitching that I owed them their wasted 40-something minutes of life writing that flame. So I upped and moved. Luckily my supports followed, by my flamers didn't. And all for writing the only very hot and heavy Kaworu/Shingi fanfic!!
So, Scribe baby, know that if anything close to what Mozell went through that was really you, don't tell, but know that your readers luv what you do and support such a cool author and person. I do. Cheers, baby.^_~

Woot! I just found your stories and was up all night reading. I came on line looking for some Grisom fic, but you've surprised me with the versatility of Greg. Some times in the face of a "Mary Sue" ebullient gushing is really what's called for, and Greg is definitely the man for the job. Not to mention, Mozelle is a quality Mary Sue, and that's as hard as coming up with a hilarious pun. Got to say I hope Gomez and Tisha, show up at some point, or may be get their own fic they would be so fun in some smutty goodness.

Thank you. Keep writing.

I just got through re-reading this story. I really enjoy the way you write the CSI characters, and I love the humor of this piece. I hope that RL committments will alow you to update soon. :)

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Okay this is just fabulous! Amazing writing, incredible characterizations, great story, great descriptions! Fangirl squees all over the place. You had me laughing out loud and scaring the cats! I kiss your little pink toes and go to read your other stuff!

Love it! My favorite line has to be when she comments on his hairiness and Greg says "I'll wax". He's such a sweetie! We definitely need more greggo fics out there. He's such an understated character. The plot is getting thick. :)

Funny. Very Funny! I like your humor. I will check back often to see if the next chapter has been written.
FireGirl

Wow, I can't believe it! Sorry, what I meant to say was that I first started reading your story soon after you'd posted the first few chapters, then I lost track of it for a little while, then the other day I was at a loss for something new to read, so I decided to try and look this story up. And guess what, you'd even updated it a bunch so I had some new yummy Greg smut to read. Damn girl you are good! I really love how Moe is realistic, and her sarcastic smart ass wit is really cool. Please keep writing, a character as hot as Greg should get a lot more action than he is. Great work!