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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I wish Leo would give her a chance, but you made his hesitation understandable. It's not the usual fear of commitment, or "what will the others say".
The sexy bits were very very good!
The sexy bits were very very good!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really captured the characters voices and feelings well. I was so caught up in it that when Leo reminds himself not to call out his ex-wife's name I read "Jenny" instead of Donna and had to go back and read it again. Very enjoyable.
CJ
CJ
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! You nailed Leo's character with precision and warmth - most impressive.