rate_review Reviews

This kinda ended in the middle of a sentence so I'm note sure if its really over.

What is here is very interesting.

Hiya, I like what I've read so far a lot. 'Tis super cool, but it looks like it's missing a part of it. It ends with an o which I'm sure is supposed to be part of a word, and the second one says it's continued directly from the first, but in the first one it has nothing about Strife and Joxer getting together. The first one ends when Strife asks Joxer to go with him down to the stream right after they set up camp. Sooo, I was wondering if it was really supposed to end like that and I was missing something, or maybe there was a problem when you loaded the story and something got cut off. Soo, yeah. Umm, good story though even if I am confused.

Whatever Dite ghas to do... I do not want to know. But this is a good fic :D

that was cool 'please sir can i have some more'