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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You need to work on your gramer, specially in the first chapter.
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July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story plot. hate the fact that Logan and Remy are Deime gods. It ruins most of the fun stuff now that their powers are influenced by god powers. The main reson I liked this story was because i like the idea of mutant runing around with abilitys like the gods but they got their powersauseause their born with them. Took ook I imagind on the gods and goddesses faces was just hilaryuse. pleace take this into consideration.