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for The Alternate Path

by AtieJen

person shavin
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a truly amazing story! For this one it really hit home for me because I do believe in the Spirits and how they guide me like they do for Chakotay and Tom. You did an amazing job! I absolutely loved it!
person Empress of Existence
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do you know taht it cuts off right at the good part?!?!?! I was really getting into it and WHAM just before he says weither or not he'll marry Tom the chapter just CUTS OFF!!!! It's cruel and unusual torture. Pl fix fix it! or at the least send me the rest.
person Nieske
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, wonderful story. It gave me butterflies y tuy tummy.
But why did it end so abruply?

I loved your story to bits.

Love,
Nieske
person christianne
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love the story but somethings wrong or something the last capter ends in the midle of a sintence and i'm dieing to know what happend so update or something please