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for Holding On

by AtieJen

person drarrysev
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been totally enthralled with your story and have been greatly saddned that it seems you have abandoned your story... please add to it I like the emotions and thoughts as well as the rather unusual way clark's pregnancy is progressing and the repercussions he will have to deal with because of his silence... his parents will have to find out that he was raped... he will have to deal with the fact that his child is the result of that rape... plus his feelings and relationship with lex... please please please write more, thank you very much!
person coriel
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what is taking so long? your story is the best that i have read in a really long time and you haven't updated in so long!

please update soon.
person Lori
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter One/Part one is not showing up. I see your website mentioned, but thought you might want to know it's not at AdultFanFiction.net.
person blu sanada
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Clark has to trust someone and Lex would be the best person. Lex hasn't done anything for the Kents not to trust him, so he would be there best bet into finding out what's wrong with Clark. Well I'm holding on to read the next chapter.
person Arnettra
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the best smallville story I've read. I love the suspense and even though you've put them on a radically different course, the characters, especially lex and clark, seem to fit with the way they're portrayed on the show and I hope that you update soon because I'd really like to see where you take this story.
person zeynel
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this new part!!! Please... Continue it!!!

When will Clark woke up? Will he woke up soon? Will Lex do something? Will the Kent be forced to say the the truth?
person citrique
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great new part!!! Continue it!!!
person GN
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh, just so you know? Part one is missing. ^_^;; heh heh heh heh. Okay, I'm off to read your fic now.

^_~GN
person SailorAurora
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was great.. I can't wait for chapter 5. :D
I wonder w's w's wrong with Clark? it's unlike other Mpreg stories, that's for sure..
person zeynel
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Write more, please!!! I just hope for an happy ending... Can't wait for the next part!!!