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for It Happened One Night

by adpi22

person snickernut99
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You will be posting more of your work right????

person krisnina77
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HA! HA! I got on the site. Anyway just wanted to tell you what a fabulous this story was. I truly enjoyed it. I especially loved the part where Sara helped Nick with the annoying girl at the club. I hope to read more stories like this soon.
person Sarah
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Brianna, this was great, I loved it. I really love the bit where Sara saves Nick from the chick, and calls him her boyfriend! one one thing for improvement (not flaming you believe me) but maybe more detail (I'm so naughty! lol!) for the sex scenes, just a suggestion. And I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, I'm just lazy when it comes to reviewing. I go through phases where I review everything, then phases where I review nothing. So I'm sorry.
person Missy
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!! So of course I had to review it again!!!! Great job!!!
person Lynn
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Can't wait to see your next one :)