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for Forever, My Angel

by AAnitaB2

person Kimmy
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A few typos/mispelled words, missing words...other than that, it was really sweet. I like how you used their previous shared dream as inspiration. Although I always felt that, that dream had transpired due to the soup'd up Manticore blood flowing in his veins. Max's blood. I didn't ask before because I was happily enjoying the story, and I know that some men with disabilites can still enjoy an active sex life, but I'm curious - do that actually feel the sensations? Or is it mostly mental stimulation from visual arousal? 'cause Logan doesn't seem to have trouble in either department... And you threw me for a six when Max asked Logan to marry her. I've never had that senario played out for me before. It was a surprise, yet plausible at that moment. And he gave her the locket. Somehow from the moment Logan confessed to Max about its origins, I knew it was destined to grace her neck. Thank you for making it happen. That scene was perfect.
person nice
schedule December 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
nice story.
But what´s with max & Zack???