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Wonderfully written. Well connected. When are new chapters coming in?

The scene was beautifully written. The only suggestion I have is about the dynamic between Cersei and Jaime. I think Jaime would have behaved more confidently than how you described. He wouldn't be the one saying "Maybe we should stop, Robert could return any minute.." If anything, Cersei would be the one saying such things, while Jaime responds with reassurance.