I've been eagerly waiting for the next chapter. It's a little short but very exciting. I love how the plot has started to kick in, and I'm even more eager now to read the next chapter.
Another excellent chapter. I did like some of the scenes. It's nice that Joffrey isn't going to toss her aside, but I like that you kept his dark nature intact in the story. I suppose if I have one complaint, it's that the chapter felt a little rushed this time. There were a lot of spelling and grammar errors that weren't present in the previous chapters. I find it helps to proofread before posting once you have had a chance to relax, after writing. The break allows your mind to clear and focus.
Damn this story is hot, characters are so great and the scenes are excellent! Any chance we'll see Joffrey try to fuck her ass?
Damn this story is hot, characters are so great and the scenes are excellent! Any chance we'll see Joffrey try to fuck her ass?
I just read chapter 5. I simply love your story. It's touching that Joffrey is able to be vulnerable around her, and his innocence if you can call him that, is endearing as well. It's a pleasure to read your work and I greatly look forward to future installments.
I've always wondered what GoT would have been like if Arya had been betrothed to Joffrey instead of Sansa. She certainly wouldn't have simply followed Joffrey's lead so easily, as the proper, docile Sansa would have. It's an intriguing pairing, and I want to see what you'll do with it. This was an excellent first chapter. I can't wait for more.
Another excellent chapter. Joffrey
tightening his grip on the wilful Wolf girl.