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by Irishdrgon

person MV007
schedule December 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I’m desperate for a new chapter. I need more slutty submissive Sarah in my life. 

schedule October 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is a very interesting concept. I am really hoping you let Chuck have a set of balls. Very few places in FF have him anything but whipped when Sarah does him wrong. She absolutely deserves a serious STD and to reap the consequences of her continuous actions. Not a one time mistake, if you like let her enjoy her threesome, over and over, but for her to get even a scintilla of happiness or satisfaction from Chuck from this point forward is an injustice. Maybe even let Chuck have Carina to rub it in:-)

schedule October 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

OK. So it appears that it's Devon and Ellie. Or maybe I'm wrong. Anything I write from this point is just opinion. It is your story so any words or actions from any of the characters are limited only to your imagination. I am not arrogant enough to tell you what you can or cannot do. To me this realisation leads to the following - there is no future for Chuck/Sarah. That relationship is untenable as is Chuck/Devon's friendship. Ellie appears not to have known so Chuck/Ellie is salvagable provided Ellie kicks Devon to the kerb. It is one thing to have an open marriage and to join Devon in his predelictions but as soon as his desires cause great harm to her baby brother then a line is crossed. Carina's knowledge is ambiguous, hard to tell if she knew about the affair and was just surprised by the pregnancy or was surprised by the whole thing. If she knew then my previous desire to have Charina is moot because Chuck/Carina is also untenable. Boils down to choice really and having to live with the consequences of the choices we make. There is no Serum in play here so Chuck cannot reason away Sarah's guilt. She has six years of freely choosing to be a deceitful skank, even after taking marriage vows. Sarah is distraught about what she has done to Chuck, really? She is distraught because she is caught. Wepdiggy wrote a parody some years back where Sarah cut off Chuck's balls. If he has anything to do with her from here he might as well cut them off himself. Serve them to her for breakfast tomorrow. Having non stop unprotected sex with Devon(?) and making Chuck wear a condom:-) :-)

I am reading stories on AFF so I have no issue with human tastes in whatever form, it's the lying, cheating, devestatingly deceptive behaviour for which characters need to be accountable.

The only bright spot is that the baby is not Chuck's, so much messier and at least this way he finds out what she is.

Great story to provoke thought.

 I would love to PM you to deepdive the motivations but I don't know much about the site.

schedule October 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh, a mystery!

schedule October 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Another excellent chapter already looking forward to the next.

person MV007
schedule October 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Desperately waiting for the next chapter. I love submissive Sarah. 

schedule September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Excellent!! Got to agree with 007 also.  As much as I love Charah for the show theres something about Sarah/OC characters thats just so much more satisfying to read.  Keeping a close eye for updates.

schedule September 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Agree with 007

person MV007
schedule September 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Super excited for this story. I’m a sucker for anything with Sarah fucking non chuck male characters. Don’t get me wrong I would never want to see it on the show. I ship charah. But for these stories it’s super hot watching Sarah be a slut. 

schedule September 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yay! A new non Charah story. I love those.