Oh damn. What an ending!
Very quick ending. Somewhat satisfying but I must confess I was hoping that Chuck got to tell both Sarah and Ellie to their faces how skanky they were. I guess this way is less angst for him. I imagined him having Ellie and Devon over for dinner and drugging all their drinks with the drug Shaw used in Paris. Unable to move but still for a while able to hear and speak, they are told pretty much what your lawyer says. Chuck then produces from a bag three exceptionally large dildos, the biggest one for Devon, oops I forgot the lube, better get my rubber mallett. What? I originally thought a docking tool so that he could remove Sarah's favourite part of Devon to give it to her to carry around seeing she liked it so much.
Carina comes out a winner - do we assume she told Chuck or that it was Morgan? Hopefully she knew nothing about the affair and went to Chuck when she found out like a good friend should. Or maybe it was Morgan and Chuck just needed to get his ducks lined up before taking action. Either way - good for Chuck.
Excellent end point even if you got there more quickly than schadenfreude would appreciate.
Terrible ending. You obviously started this story with no thought on how to end it.
Looking forward to seeing how this ends. Alot of loose threads here
Interesting developments but the timing is everything. It feels like this is well before the pregnancy given that they have just been married (at about four years) and the pregnancy is at about six years. If so this means that either Morgan didn't tell Chuck for some reason - wouldn't put it past some writers here for Sarah to discover Morgan and offer to bang him to keep quiet - or Chuck is again being written as so pathetically weak that he chooses to ignore the knowledge of her (and others?) constant cheating for years just so he can continue to get laid occasionally.
Third option is my favourite. Chuck is not away on business, he is visiting Jill and his baby with a quick trip to see Hannah and his twins on his way home. Travelling of course with Lou so that he can have his usual threesome in each city. This of course only works if the mystery couple is not Ellie/Devon because whilst giving Sarah some of her own medicine might be therapeutic there is limited opportunity for him to deal out justifiable retribution to his sister and brother in law. Explaining to Sarah that he needs these brunettes because she just doesn't do enough for him might be fun.
Lay on Macduff
So glad to see you’re coming back. I can’t wait. I’d hate to admit how often I check back for chuck stories. Something about Sarah walker getting fucked does it for me. As for ideas. This is just off the top of my head. What if Sarah has to go undercover to a bachelor party to infiltrate some organization. She’s the entertainment. Chuck or Casey or both are her security. Maybe Bryce is already on the inside. She’ll have to fuck the bachelor. Maybe a few others while chuck and Casey watch. Maybe Bryce gets to join in much to chucks chagrin. For longevity purposes after the party she pretend dates Bryce to be in the organization and has to fuck around with any number of bad guys.
Honestly though, anything with Sarah getting dick will keep me coming back every time.
Mea culpa, mea culpa.
I just re-read my earlier comments and realised that I gave Ellie (IF indeed it is Ellie) too much credit. I foolishly said that, as she was unaware, she could still save her relationship with Chuck by kicking Devon to the kerb now that she knew who he was involved with. Upon re-reading the story it is obvious that she finds out when she is still a fiance, not married and a mother, which means she has known and participated for years. Time for Chuck to arrange for an Elana Truffaut kind of family dinner:-)
I have had some even darker thoughts as to how Chuck could get satisfaction and they are fun.
Thanks so much for the entertainment. Great to see you still at it.
Hey Irish. I really like your stuff and if you are still writing I was wondering if you could do a story where Sarah is seducing Cole Barker but actually has sex with him while Chuck is listening. Thanks and I love your stories!
RIP
Think we've seen the last of this. Maybe he's upset that Pragamtist figured out his "secret" Devon/Ellie plot twist.