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for Sarah vs The IAE-Remastered

by Irishdrgon

schedule January 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I loved this story the first time you posted it, along with a few others. You took it down before getting to the big payoff though. Good work and I hope you get the payoff in this time.

person CKing
schedule January 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I know and like how this isn't Chuck and Sarah as we need some of those.

A Karmic fate for Shaw is for Sarah and Sean to fall in love. Leading to a happy ending for her, especially if it ends up like the life Shaw wanted with his wife. The only problem it leaves an innocent harmed by this, Chuck. Who only had the crime of falling in love with someone Shaw targetted.

Hopefully Chuck could find love and/or happiness, maybe with someone else. Either in an ending here or in a sequel series if you decide to do one.

person MV007
schedule January 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I’m glad you’re back. I really enjoyed this story and can’t wait for more.