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for Sarah vs The IAE-Remastered

by Irishdrgon

schedule March 15, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yeah!!! Pregnant Sarah. I just wonder how this is going to backfire on Jill? Is she going to use the serum on Chuck, and intend for herself to be his mate? Or will there be an accident and she bonds him to Carina? Ellie? Alex? Who really cares about this sidenote. All that matters is Sarah is finally knocked up and Chuck is not the father! Great work.

schedule February 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I love it and am eagerly awaiting the next installment !

schedule February 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Irishdragon, I just noticed your review thanks, and I have to say that my idea of a happy ending in this story isn't what Charah fluffers would think is a happy ending. I want to see the story where Sarah leaves Chuck to have another mans baby. I would prefer her baby daddy to be Black, but hey Sean works too! It could be for the mission, and Sarah falls into her role too much. Anyway I like your stories the way you write them , so don't go out of your way. I am eager to see what happens next : )

schedule February 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks very much...feel free to send prompts for other stories

schedule February 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for reviews peeps. Can this possibly have a happy ending????

person Kinces21
schedule January 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Please continue this story, it's really good so far and I wouldn't want to see it fade into dust.

schedule January 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

good to have you back, keep it up, looks great 

person delioman
schedule January 9, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I LOVE the direction this story is taking! Mind controlled slutty Sarah is a HUGE turn on! Wish I could have read the original before it was removed.

schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Excellent work! I agree with Jill... I want Walker pregnant too!

person mty14
schedule January 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

In what way is this remastered? Like, how is it different? You don't really say anything about that anywhere.


From what I vaguely remember, this was one of your better stories. But the plot went all over the place and started making no sense very very fast. Curious to see what you've changed.